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陈老师的作文课堂第五讲：搭好框架再作文


    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">点击</span></strong><span style="color: black;">上面的 "&nbsp;</span><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;">回忆是一片森林</strong></span><span style="color: black;">" 进行</span><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;">关注</strong></span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;">第&nbsp;</strong><strong style="color: blue;">56 篇</strong></span></p><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">这是“回忆是一片森林”公众号</span></strong><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">第56篇原创<span style="color: black;">文案</span></span></strong>
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    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">陈 老 师&nbsp;的 作 文 课 堂</strong></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_gif/IqicDAGdXNibvhLib8cBYiciaeXaELPqBSiadORo22fCTWAG25KVic4XtiaDcVBBXicQialfDk78YUFFAibBrXDicqeTk3Y7cA/640?wx_fmt=gif&amp;tp=webp&amp;wxfrom=5&amp;wx_lazy=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;">陈 老 师&nbsp;</strong></span><span style="color: black;">·&nbsp;</span><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;">作 文&nbsp;</strong><strong style="color: blue;">课 堂</strong></span></span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;">搭好框架再作文</strong></span></p><span style="color: black;">文 / 老 腰</span><span style="color: black;">奋笔而写，<span style="color: black;">而后</span>渐渐觉得思绪的泉源将尽，不<span style="color: black;">晓得</span>接下来该写什么。</span><span style="color: black;">于是，把作文纸撕掉，掉转作文方向，重新再写一篇。</span><span style="color: black;">或许这次顺利完成，或许，又要撕掉作文纸<span style="color: black;">……</span></span><span style="color: black;">这<span style="color: black;">便是</span>有的学生在家里写作文时的场景。</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">显现</span>这种<span style="color: black;">状况</span>，<span style="color: black;">重点</span>的<span style="color: black;">原由</span>还在于平常练得少，材料<span style="color: black;">累积</span><span style="color: black;">亦</span><span style="color: black;">不足</span>厚实。但反过<span style="color: black;">来讲</span>，有多少学生，<span style="color: black;">尤其</span>是义务教育<span style="color: black;">周期</span>的学生，能够观题即写，信手拈来呢？</span><span style="color: black;">此时，<span style="color: black;">咱们</span><span style="color: black;">必须</span>在动笔作文之前，先搭好框架。</span><span style="color: black;"><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_png/PYUZdwyjaoBb6icaJ76jQlZ0uaXicYFxibDJcx47ZzGGmyUdXibXnlwnSCSjzH9GXgGwibSpABJ6efztMom1LbVict2A/640?wx_fmt=png&amp;tp=webp&amp;wxfrom=5&amp;wx_lazy=1&amp;wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></span><span style="color: black;">框架，<span style="color: black;">便是</span>作文的提纲，<span style="color: black;">亦</span><span style="color: black;">便是</span>你要写这篇作文的思路。</span><span style="color: black;">就<span style="color: black;">好似</span>，砌墙之前，要先做好设计，打好地基<span style="color: black;">同样</span>。</span><span style="color: black;">搭好作文的框架，能让你的作文条理清楚，详略得当，中心<span style="color: black;">明显</span>，<span style="color: black;">乃至</span>过渡自然。</span><span style="color: black;">准备好了吗？接下来<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>来学习，<span style="color: black;">怎样</span>搭好作文的框架。</span><span style="color: black;"><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_jpg/PYUZdwyjaoBb6icaJ76jQlZ0uaXicYFxibDREIJT1cY3gRcx4kicyfgWHRnoZic6pF73BnZNEKFuj8KB6VPrgfzibQAA/640?wx_fmt=jpeg&amp;tp=webp&amp;wxfrom=5&amp;wx_lazy=1&amp;wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></span>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">01</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">看好字数搭框架&nbsp;</span></strong></span></p><span style="color: black;">写作文，自然不是<span style="color: black;">仅有</span>应付考试，这一目的。常常练笔作文，用处是<span style="color: black;">非常多</span>的，<span style="color: black;">这儿</span>就<span style="color: black;">再也不</span>展开。</span><span style="color: black;">但躲不开的，依然是考试的作文怎么写。<span style="color: black;">平常</span>的练习作文，从某个方面<span style="color: black;">来讲</span>，<span style="color: black;">亦</span>是在为考试作文做准备。</span><span style="color: black;">
      <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">搭好这些作文的框架，<span style="color: black;">第1</span>步<span style="color: black;">便是</span>要看好字数。就<span style="color: black;">好似</span><span style="color: black;">晓得</span>了占地面积，<span style="color: black;">才可</span>更好设计这房子该怎么修建。</p>
    </span><span style="color: black;">义务教育<span style="color: black;">周期</span>，<span style="color: black;">通常</span>小学的低年部字数的<span style="color: black;">需求</span>不高，<span style="color: black;">乃至</span>不存在字数<span style="color: black;">需求</span>。<span style="color: black;">这儿</span><span style="color: black;">重点</span>针对小学高年部，以及初中<span style="color: black;">周期</span>来介绍。</span><span style="color: black;">在这些<span style="color: black;">周期</span>，练习作文，<span style="color: black;">通常</span>以500字为<span style="color: black;">基本</span><span style="color: black;">需求</span>。</span><span style="color: black;">你的作文纸，一行多少个字，写到哪一行才完成500字的<span style="color: black;">需求</span>，这些是要“计算”清楚的。</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">通常</span><span style="color: black;">状况</span>下，改卷老师对考试的作文，自然段数<span style="color: black;">小于</span>3（<span style="color: black;">包括</span>）的，<span style="color: black;">第1</span>印象都不会太好。</span><span style="color: black;">头脚大，而身子小，<span style="color: black;">欠好</span>看。</span><span style="color: black;">头脚小，而中间<span style="color: black;">仅有</span>一个大肚子，<span style="color: black;">亦</span><span style="color: black;">欠好</span>看。</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">因此</span>，<span style="color: black;">咱们</span><span style="color: black;">必须</span>为作文，做好4个（<span style="color: black;">包括</span>）以上的自然段设计。</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">那样</span><span style="color: black;">按照</span>字数，<span style="color: black;">第1</span>自然段你大约要写多少字，占作文纸中的几行，其它自然段呢？</span><span style="color: black;">这</span><span style="color: black;">里<span style="color: black;">必定</span>要记住，作</span><span style="color: black;">为义务教育</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">周期</span>的考试作文，首尾两段<span style="color: black;">尽可能</span>不要太长，要留好空间，给中间的事例去铺开<span style="color: black;">描述</span>。</span><span style="color: black;"><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_jpg/PYUZdwyjaoBb6icaJ76jQlZ0uaXicYFxibDyCnjicEYcIR4iayffUEZb07ycKJmCLeWobRTcq24GcLib5PgnZ40C3ibEg/640?wx_fmt=jpeg&amp;tp=webp&amp;wxfrom=5&amp;wx_lazy=1&amp;wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></span>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">02</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">框架<span style="color: black;">包括</span>什么内容&nbsp;</span></strong></span></p><span style="color: black;">作文的框架<span style="color: black;">重点</span><span style="color: black;">包含</span>：</span><span style="color: black;">1.题目</span><span style="color: black;">2.各自然段<span style="color: black;">重点</span>内容（用一句话概括）</span><span style="color: black;">3.</span><span style="color: black;">过渡段</span><span style="color: black;">4.</span><span style="color: black;">结尾的主题升华</span><span style="color: black;">5.线索、写作<span style="color: black;">办法</span>等</span><span style="color: black;">其中，1.2是<span style="color: black;">必要</span>的。</span><span style="color: black;">作文中你<span style="color: black;">能够</span>有3过渡段，<span style="color: black;">亦</span><span style="color: black;">能够</span>改为过渡句，<span style="color: black;">或</span>不写过渡。</span><span style="color: black;">至于4结尾的主题升华，这是能<span style="color: black;">增多</span>作文分数的一个项目，能写的<span style="color: black;">尽可能</span>要写。当然，不写<span style="color: black;">亦</span>不会破坏作文的结构。</span><span style="color: black;">最后一个5线索、写作<span style="color: black;">办法</span>等，各凭<span style="color: black;">兴趣</span>，我是不<span style="color: black;">爱好</span>写的。</span><span style="color: black;">基本结构，是<span style="color: black;">这般</span>的——</span>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_png/PYUZdwyjaoBb6icaJ76jQlZ0uaXicYFxibDgX1dgaMUvd57zFPMvjqibc1fscSk2XGH05iceoUL2ORdbnIcQRMt6pmQ/640?wx_fmt=png&amp;tp=webp&amp;wxfrom=5&amp;wx_lazy=1&amp;wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></p><span style="color: black;"><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_jpg/PYUZdwyjaoBb6icaJ76jQlZ0uaXicYFxibDfVTo4qt0gc992dEUzM0LDNrzWkX22JK80HCc4NIcReNTicJARoDibHCA/640?wx_fmt=jpeg&amp;tp=webp&amp;wxfrom=5&amp;wx_lazy=1&amp;wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></span>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">03</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">几个框架示例</span></strong></span></p><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">经过</span>两个例子，进一步来学习<span style="color: black;">怎样</span>搭框架：</span><span style="color: black;">1.题目：幸运的受伤</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">怎样</span>把受伤，写出“幸运”的味道，是作文的<span style="color: black;">重要</span>所在。<span style="color: black;">针对</span>学生<span style="color: black;">来讲</span>，现实的场景<span style="color: black;">重点</span>是家庭和学校。</span>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_png/PYUZdwyjaoBb6icaJ76jQlZ0uaXicYFxibDvcfX58uN3ic3ahhp1LZz4hiclYXKiagn7vEMP98DcEEeAZKtNf8sFaQUg/640?wx_fmt=png&amp;tp=webp&amp;wxfrom=5&amp;wx_lazy=1&amp;wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></p><span style="color: black;">
      <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">在上面对这篇作文的设计框架中，<span style="color: black;">咱们</span><span style="color: black;">能够</span>更好地看出框架的结构形式。</p>
    </span><span style="color: black;">题目在最左边，用大括号展开，右边则列出各个自然段要写的内容。</span><span style="color: black;">从上图<span style="color: black;">咱们</span><span style="color: black;">能够</span>看出，这篇作文计划分为5个自然段——</span><span style="color: black;">第1和第5自然段为开头结尾。<span style="color: black;">况且</span>内容已清楚地写在框架上了。<span style="color: black;">这般</span>，学生<span style="color: black;">能够</span>很好地把握好开头结尾的“点题”、“呼应”和“升华主题”。</span><span style="color: black;">你看出来了吗？</span><span style="color: black;">“点题”与“</span><span style="color: black;">呼应</span><span style="color: black;">”</span><span style="color: black;">：开头结尾都<span style="color: black;">说到</span>了“受伤</span><span style="color: black;">”，<span style="color: black;">说到</span>了“幸运</span><span style="color: black;">”。</span>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">“升华主题”：最后一句话。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">从框架来看，<span style="color: black;">文案</span>写两件事，一件写学校，一件写家里。所以，在学校与家这两个场景中间，设计了一个“过渡段”，安排是很<span style="color: black;">恰当</span>的。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">而两个场景的事情，框架中<span style="color: black;">不必</span>详写，直接<span style="color: black;">能够</span><span style="color: black;">按照</span>框架，在作文纸中写作。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">再说，考试的时候，你想先把作文<span style="color: black;">所有</span>一句一句地写在稿纸中，<span style="color: black;">而后</span>再搬抄到作文纸上吗？时间够吗？</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_jpg/PYUZdwyjaoBb6icaJ76jQlZ0uaXicYFxibDK4GGEykN21HjCQf5V73GD0kscU0pZD5hFtbEkhdPtwjE9qUOv1UYbQ/640?wx_fmt=jpeg&amp;tp=webp&amp;wxfrom=5&amp;wx_lazy=1&amp;wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">2.题目：我的初中生活</p>

    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">通常</span><span style="color: black;">状况</span>下，这种题目会出<span style="color: black;">此刻</span>九年级的时候，<span style="color: black;">亦</span><span style="color: black;">便是</span>以前的“初三”。<span style="color: black;">一块</span>来<span style="color: black;">瞧瞧</span>它的框架。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_png/PYUZdwyjaoBb6icaJ76jQlZ0uaXicYFxibDamF46A35ojIiafYKhicGicrX1NqibcQNJMgb0qoYwIR9IpHIdibtvB2h2pw/640?wx_fmt=png&amp;tp=webp&amp;wxfrom=5&amp;wx_lazy=1&amp;wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">从上面设计</span><span style="color: black;">的框架中，<span style="color: black;">咱们</span><span style="color: black;">能够</span>看到，和上面<span style="color: black;">第1</span>个<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>举的例子<span style="color: black;">同样</span>，全文分为5个自然段。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">开头、结尾的内容，<span style="color: black;">亦</span><span style="color: black;">一样</span><span style="color: black;">仔细</span>地写了出来。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">中间分为3个自然段，三件事以七年级、八年级、九年级<span style="color: black;">掰开</span>来写，刚好覆盖了<span style="color: black;">全部</span>初中生活，切合题目。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">可能<span style="color: black;">思虑</span>到字数，<span style="color: black;">或</span>是结构的问题，<span style="color: black;">这儿</span><span style="color: black;">无</span>设计过渡段，而是设计了两个过渡句，放在自然段的开头。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_jpg/PYUZdwyjaoBb6icaJ76jQlZ0uaXicYFxibDNP0F8WiaUBGZPXGHHPcZIbnaPFuSIsgZy7Plq67vgaGqEcOB1HtR14g/640?wx_fmt=jpeg&amp;tp=webp&amp;wxfrom=5&amp;wx_lazy=1&amp;wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">文<span style="color: black;">没</span>定法。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">无</span>人规定写作文之前，<span style="color: black;">必定</span>要搭框架。只<span style="color: black;">不外</span>，这是一种学习写作文的<span style="color: black;">办法</span><span style="color: black;">罢了</span>。</p>

    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">只要<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>经常学习优秀的<span style="color: black;">文案</span>，经常动手进行练习，久之，你会<span style="color: black;">发掘</span>，写作文并不难。</span></p>
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4zhvml8 发表于 2024-9-25 17:01:10

你的见解独到，让我受益匪浅，非常感谢。

qzmjef 发表于 2024-10-17 19:53:56

你的努力一定会被看见，相信自己，加油。

m5k1umn 发表于 2024-10-19 23:10:31

你的话语如春风拂面，温暖了我的心房，真的很感谢。

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