l14107cb 发表于 2024-7-7 15:26:50

3类中考“必考”作文,按模板写,多拿几分亦不难!

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    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">经典导读</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">源自北大 陪你读写</span></p>
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    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">各地中考临近,有人说作文<span style="color: black;">重点</span>靠平时<span style="color: black;">累积</span>和训练,临阵磨枪不管用。</span><span style="color: black;">但奇怪的是,中考经常会<span style="color: black;">显现</span><span style="color: black;">有些</span>高分作文的“黑马”。这些<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>平时作文成绩平平,但<span style="color: black;">由于</span><span style="color: black;">把握</span>了<span style="color: black;">有些</span>“<span style="color: black;">招数</span>”,反而在考试时多拿了几分。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">中考作文中,这三种考题属于“老熟人”,今年不考明年考:励志类、写人情感类、感悟类。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">云舒写教育的老师们总结了常考的三大作文类型的写作“模板”,让<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span><span style="color: black;">瞧瞧</span>,在中考这个分水岭中,能多拿几分是几分。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">中考作文怎么写?来点提分干货。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">1、</span>励志类</strong></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">做为</span>中考作文中的“老熟人”,励志类作文可谓是“百考不厌”。这一大类<span style="color: black;">能够</span><span style="color: black;">包括</span><span style="color: black;">非常多</span>类型,<span style="color: black;">例如</span>毅力、成功、<span style="color: black;">保持</span>、<span style="color: black;">目的</span>、失败的<span style="color: black;">道理</span>等等…统一概括为“励志类”。此类<span style="color: black;">文案</span>若采用“对比法”来写,对主旨的<span style="color: black;">明显</span>会有<span style="color: black;">帮忙</span>,如下:</p><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_png/iblbJ6UByeOrpMm8gE7PQQsmABDU2uVGVziclAwyvGtBztspamrRd8ZfDcXPf83wZqA9pia7PDx73OAmibwq2qaFbA/640?wx_fmt=png&amp;tp=webp&amp;wxfrom=5&amp;wx_lazy=1&amp;wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;">
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">失败-成功三步法</strong></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;讲失败案例--写成功经过--点题励志</span></strong></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">1、</span>讲失败案例</strong></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">1、讲失败心情:运用环境描写<span style="color: black;">或</span>心理描写等写出自己失败之后<span style="color: black;">懊丧</span><span style="color: black;">或</span>糟糕<span style="color: black;">或</span>孤寂<span style="color: black;">或</span><span style="color: black;">哀痛</span>的心理。(约80字)</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">2、简述失败事件:交代背景,参加了一场比赛<span style="color: black;">或</span>考试,出乎意料地自己失败了。(约80字)</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">2、</span>详述成功事件</strong></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">思考--下决心--<span style="color: black;">奋斗</span>过程--结果--再思考</strong></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">1、铺垫:自己一个人安静地思考,思考自己失败的<span style="color: black;">原由</span>。(详,约100字)<span style="color: black;">或</span>自己看到某样正在怒放的植物,植物的怒放启发自己思索自己。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">2、下定决心:不想失败,想要在下一次的比赛<span style="color: black;">或</span>考试中胜出。(略,约80字)</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">3、<span style="color: black;">奋斗</span>训练:<span style="color: black;">仔细</span>地叙述自己的<span style="color: black;">奋斗</span>和付出,<span style="color: black;">能够</span>采用对比、描写、衬托等手法写作。训练过程尽管是辛苦、枯燥、难耐的,<span style="color: black;">然则</span>依旧在<span style="color: black;">保持</span>。(详,约200字)</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">4、结果与思考:再次比赛<span style="color: black;">或</span>考试成功了,这一次<span style="color: black;">无</span>雀跃,明白了自己该<span style="color: black;">怎样</span>看待失败。(详,约150字)</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">3、</span>点题励志</strong></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">点出<span style="color: black;">文案</span>的标题以及<span style="color: black;">文案</span>的主题,失败了并不可怕,要微笑地面对生活,失败后要用平和的<span style="color: black;">心理</span>面对,要勇敢地突破自己,收获成功后<span style="color: black;">亦</span>不要得意忘形。( 详,约100字)</p><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_png/iblbJ6UByeOrpMm8gE7PQQsmABDU2uVGVNTlHLobdbXuoCtCTsqS1A5qibLQGIDY0nCgD3SyU2RSJ7J2RWicxibovg/640?wx_fmt=png&amp;tp=webp&amp;wxfrom=5&amp;wx_lazy=1&amp;wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;">
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">万能开头结尾素材</strong></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">咱们</span>赞美大海的浩瀚,<span style="color: black;">是不是</span>会想到江河奔流中的坎坷与执着?</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">咱们</span>赞美高山的雄伟,<span style="color: black;">是不是</span>会想到土石积淀中的漫长与沉默?</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">咱们</span>赞美景色的秀美,<span style="color: black;">是不是</span>会想到万物生长中的艰辛与蓬勃?</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">无</span>XX(理想、<span style="color: black;">保持</span>…),人生就如荒漠,<span style="color: black;">无</span>生气;</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">无</span>XX(理想、<span style="color: black;">保持</span>…),人生就如黑夜,<span style="color: black;">无</span>光明;</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">无</span>XX(理想、<span style="color: black;">保持</span>…),人生就如迷宫,<span style="color: black;">无</span>方向。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">倘若</span>说人生是一首优美的乐曲,<span style="color: black;">那样</span>XX则是其中不可或缺的音符。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">倘若</span>说人生是一望<span style="color: black;">没</span>际的大海,<span style="color: black;">那样</span>XX则是一个骤然翻起的浪花。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">倘若</span>说人生是一片湛蓝的天空,<span style="color: black;">那样</span>XX则是一朵漂浮的淡淡的云。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">亦</span>许你<span style="color: black;">没</span>法<span style="color: black;">持有</span>深邃的蓝天,<span style="color: black;">然则</span>你<span style="color: black;">能够</span>做飘逸的白云;</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">亦</span>许你<span style="color: black;">没</span>法<span style="color: black;">持有</span>浩瀚的大海,<span style="color: black;">然则</span>你<span style="color: black;">能够</span>做清幽的小溪;</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">亦</span>许你<span style="color: black;">没</span>法<span style="color: black;">持有</span>辽阔的草原,<span style="color: black;">然则</span>你<span style="color: black;">能够</span>做执着的绿洲。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">只要你XX(心怀感恩、坚韧不拔等等),你就会感受到生命的<span style="color: black;">道理</span>。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">2、</span>写人情感类</strong></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">这类<span style="color: black;">文案</span>,<span style="color: black;">通常</span>多见于写人、写角色、写自己内心情感。<span style="color: black;">例如</span>我的老师、我的爸爸、我最敬爱的人等。写作<span style="color: black;">招数</span>如下:</p><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_png/iblbJ6UByeOrpMm8gE7PQQsmABDU2uVGVziclAwyvGtBztspamrRd8ZfDcXPf83wZqA9pia7PDx73OAmibwq2qaFbA/640?wx_fmt=png&amp;tp=webp&amp;wxfrom=5&amp;wx_lazy=1&amp;wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;">
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">总分总</strong></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">点题--详述<span style="color: black;">名人</span>及事件--点题</strong></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">1、</span>先点题</strong></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">1、开篇点题,点明标题,写出自己内心中的情感。(略,约60字)</p>

    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">2、</span>详述<span style="color: black;">名人</span>及事件</strong></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">1、交代背景</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">如自己马上要回北京了,与亲朋好友<span style="color: black;">拜别</span>,以<span style="color: black;">明显</span>该情感的<span style="color: black;">剧烈</span>。(略,约80字)</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">2、<span style="color: black;">名人</span>及事件</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">仔细</span>描写<span style="color: black;">名人</span>、叙述生活中的事件,阐述事件<span style="color: black;">出现</span>的<span style="color: black;">原由</span>。如:描写外婆的银丝、“我”跟外婆说我不吃虾的<span style="color: black;">原由</span>。(详,约200字)</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">3、刻画细节</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">外婆为“我”剥虾的画面。用动作和事件刻画<span style="color: black;">名人</span>形象及情感。(详,约200字)</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">4、穿插回忆</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">回忆自己与外婆<span style="color: black;">相关</span>的过去,表达自己对外婆的情感。(详,约120字)</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">3、</span>再点题</strong></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">再次点出<span style="color: black;">文案</span>的标题以及<span style="color: black;">文案</span>的主题,<span style="color: black;">能够</span>以抒情<span style="color: black;">或</span>议论为主。如:时光在流淌着,我渐渐明白了家人在每一个普通的举动中对我的爱,渐渐明白<span style="color: black;">没</span>论驶到生命的哪座驿站,有亲人便有暖流相伴。</p><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_png/iblbJ6UByeOrpMm8gE7PQQsmABDU2uVGVNTlHLobdbXuoCtCTsqS1A5qibLQGIDY0nCgD3SyU2RSJ7J2RWicxibovg/640?wx_fmt=png&amp;tp=webp&amp;wxfrom=5&amp;wx_lazy=1&amp;wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;">
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">万能开头结尾素材</strong></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">在人生短暂而漫长的路途中,给你快乐的<span style="color: black;">亦</span>许是你的<span style="color: black;">伴侣</span>,让你<span style="color: black;">漂亮</span>的<span style="color: black;">亦</span>许是你的追求,令你充实的<span style="color: black;">亦</span>许是你的事业,<span style="color: black;">然则</span>,使你温暖的必定是你的XX。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">ta用ta的身体为你阻挡着寒气袭人的风霜,更用ta的爱心为你消除了成长中的<span style="color: black;">懊恼</span>,用ta的智慧为你化解了一次又一次的迷惘;XX永远是你的灿烂阳光。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">您不是雨露,却带来了新生的<span style="color: black;">期盼</span>;您不是泉水,却带来了生命的甘甜;您不是太阳,却带来了人间的温暖。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">您如同溪流,<span style="color: black;">无</span>江河奔腾的浪花,<span style="color: black;">亦</span><span style="color: black;">无</span>大海壮阔的<span style="color: black;">波涛</span>,但山石间的那点叮咚,是您欢快的旋律。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">您如同星星,<span style="color: black;">无</span>太阳耀眼的光芒,<span style="color: black;">亦</span><span style="color: black;">无</span>月亮迷人的浪漫,但夜空中的那点光亮,是您生命价值的闪现。</p>您如同沙砾,<span style="color: black;">无</span>大山的伟岸,<span style="color: black;">亦</span><span style="color: black;">无</span>溪流的悠闲,但山水间的那点铺垫,是您默默的奉献。
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">您的笑容是世界上最和煦的春风,您的眼泪是世界上最<span style="color: black;">宝贵</span>的珍珠,您的皱纹是辛苦岁月霜雪雨的刻痕,您的鼓励让<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>扬起了奋斗的风帆;</p>

    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">3、</span>感悟类</strong></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">这种作文<span style="color: black;">通常</span>都是<span style="color: black;">一般</span>看起来比较“虚”,考生会有种“不<span style="color: black;">晓得</span><span style="color: black;">怎样</span>下手”的感觉。以下分4大类分别介绍写法,并举例说明。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">01</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">赞美自然</strong></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">点题--背景--详写景色--总结</strong></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">1、开篇点题(80字<span style="color: black;">上下</span>)</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">点明大自然伟大,值得<span style="color: black;">大众</span>热爱这一中心&nbsp; &nbsp;</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">2、何时何地见此景(80字<span style="color: black;">上下</span>)</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">简述在何时何地见到了大自然的美景,交代背景</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">3、正文主体(500字<span style="color: black;">上下</span>)</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">写景<span style="color: black;">必定</span>要有主有次,层次分明。详写略写都要有,篇幅不一。&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp;&nbsp;</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">(1) 美景一:简单描写一处美景,环境描写</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">(详,约100字)</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">(2) 美景二:<span style="color: black;">仔细</span>写另一处美景,与前一处形成详略上的对比,环境描写</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">(详,约300字)</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">(3) 美景三(<span style="color: black;">选择</span>):在略写几处景色,<span style="color: black;">明显</span>特点<span style="color: black;">就可</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">(略,约100字)</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">第4部分:总结写感悟:大自然<span style="color: black;">没</span>限美好,人与自然应该和谐相处。心理描写和议论抒情为主 ( 详,约120字)</p><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_png/iblbJ6UByeOrpMm8gE7PQQsmABDU2uVGVNTlHLobdbXuoCtCTsqS1A5qibLQGIDY0nCgD3SyU2RSJ7J2RWicxibovg/640?wx_fmt=png&amp;tp=webp&amp;wxfrom=5&amp;wx_lazy=1&amp;wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;">
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    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">大自然是一位作曲家,谱出<span style="color: black;">没</span>数悦耳的天籁,风鸣涛泳是他伟大的创作;</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">大自然是一位诗人,吟诵出优美的篇章,森林花园是他<span style="color: black;">漂亮</span>的情怀;</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">大自然是一位作家,写出最动人的故事,花开花落是他故事的章节;</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">大自然是一位画师,描绘出<span style="color: black;">没</span>数五彩缤纷的画卷,江河流水是他的多彩笔墨。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">世界上最美的声音,不是哗啦啦的雨声;不是泉水的叮咚声;不是草丛中的沙沙声;<span style="color: black;">亦</span>不是雷电的轰隆声。世界上最美的声音,不是独奏,而是大自然所有声音的合奏。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">02</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">思乡怀人</strong></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">点题--写景写事--总结--感慨</strong></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">1、开篇点题</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">如,点明思念家乡及亲人这一中心&nbsp; (略,约80字)</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">2、<span style="color: black;">仔细</span>写景</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">如:写北京与故乡<span style="color: black;">相关</span>的景色,环境描写(详,约100字)</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">畅想家乡的景色,环境描写(详,约200字)</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">3、写事</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">回忆家乡的过往,细节描写(详,约200字)</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">4、文末总结</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">写情感:思念家乡,爱家乡。心理描写和议论抒情为主( 详,约120字)</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">5、感慨(<span style="color: black;">选择</span>)</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">感慨家乡变化,可赞扬<span style="color: black;">亦</span>可慨叹<span style="color: black;">有些</span>传统<span style="color: black;">再也不</span>了 (详,约100字)</p><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_png/iblbJ6UByeOrpMm8gE7PQQsmABDU2uVGVNTlHLobdbXuoCtCTsqS1A5qibLQGIDY0nCgD3SyU2RSJ7J2RWicxibovg/640?wx_fmt=png&amp;tp=webp&amp;wxfrom=5&amp;wx_lazy=1&amp;wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;">
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">万能开头结尾素材</strong></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">乡情是一首老歌</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">时光荏苒依然记得</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">乡情是一杯浓酒</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">千杯入肚更加火热</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">乡情是一根红线</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">牢牢的栓在游子心窝</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">乡情是一张丝网</p><span style="color: black;">步行到</span>哪里都被<span style="color: black;">捉捕</span>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">故乡的河是最清的,那里曾留下了我与小伙伴嬉戏的身影;故乡的树是最绿的,那里曾记录了<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>在树下乘凉听<span style="color: black;">成人</span>讲故事的情景;故乡的田野是最丰饶的,那里曾留下了我父母辛勤劳动的汗水!</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">乡愁是一个<span style="color: black;">tel</span>,我在这头,母亲在那头;乡愁是十五的月亮,每逢佳节备思亲;乡愁是一张机票,归心似箭。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">03</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">民间习俗</strong></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">介绍习俗--详写<span style="color: black;">源自</span>及变化--抒情--总结</strong></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">1、开门见山</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">介绍一种民间习俗,如北方习惯腌菜等(略,约80字)</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">2、<span style="color: black;">仔细</span>介绍</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">仔细</span>描写一种习俗的<span style="color: black;">特殊</span><span style="color: black;">或</span>工艺等,可详写家中长辈<span style="color: black;">保存</span>的习俗。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">写<span style="color: black;">源自</span>:阐述习俗形成的<span style="color: black;">原由</span>,环境描写,如北方寒冷冬季<span style="color: black;">没</span>菜(详,约200字)</p>

    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">写变化与发展:描述时代进步,习俗<span style="color: black;">亦</span><span style="color: black;">再也不</span>,如<span style="color: black;">此刻</span>的北方<span style="color: black;">已然</span>不<span style="color: black;">必须</span>腌菜(详,约200字)</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">3、写情感:怀念旧习俗中的优点,<span style="color: black;">例如</span>腌菜促进家庭交流(详,约120字)</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">4、总结,写感悟,传统习俗要让<span style="color: black;">位置于</span>现代文化吗?心理描写和议论抒情为主(详,约120字)</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">04</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">心理变化(由<span style="color: black;">不睬</span>解到理解)</strong></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">点题--交代故事及其中转折--总结</strong></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">1、开篇点题</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">点明应理解他人,<span style="color: black;">不该</span>有偏见这一中心(略,约80字)</p>

    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">2、讲述故事</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">交代背景,有农村的亲戚来家里做客,带来<span style="color: black;">非常多</span>土特产(略,约80字)</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">事件主体(详,约550字)</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">(1)铺垫:讨厌土特产,觉得父母的回赠值钱得多(详,约100字)</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">(2)<span style="color: black;">出现</span>不快:嫌亲戚卫生习惯<span style="color: black;">欠好</span>,言语<span style="color: black;">卑鄙</span>等,<span style="color: black;">出现</span>了矛盾(略,约100字)</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">(3)受到教育:在我遇到困难时,是亲戚热情相助,让我刮目相看(详,约200字)</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">(4)幡然醒悟:亲戚送的礼虽轻,但情谊重。有生活<span style="color: black;">要求</span>差而有些“小毛病”并<span style="color: black;">不可</span><span style="color: black;">做为</span>偏见他的理由(详,约150字)</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">3、总结事件写感悟</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">乡村民风淳朴,虽然“村里人”不完美,但<span style="color: black;">不应</span>加以<span style="color: black;">卑视</span>。心理描写和议论抒情为主( 详,约100字)</p>
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    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">理解,是友谊的结晶;理解,是从信任中开出的鲜花;理解,是人与人之间关爱的光环。它能让误会变成点缀<span style="color: black;">漂亮</span>的小瑕疵,于社会中,人们相互的理解,能使这个<span style="color: black;">大众</span>共有的家园更加繁荣、安定。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">理解是沟通之桥,拉近人与人的距离;理解是和善之本,让社会充满温暖;理解是润滑剂,让世界少些摩擦。</p><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_png/iblbJ6UByeOrpMm8gE7PQQsmABDU2uVGV3zKicuG1kE4BuJQPM22S4YVQwuK6Lk56hgBB1ibBfY2Yf9vUWEXwiaLXA/640?wx_fmt=png&amp;tp=webp&amp;wxfrom=5&amp;wx_lazy=1&amp;wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;">
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