6hz7vif 发表于 2024-9-2 17:11:28

一封英语求职信帮忙你找到心仪的工作 | 商务英语

<span style="color: black;">找外企的工作<span style="color: black;">必定</span>少不了过硬的英语能力。</span><span style="color: black;">那怎么展示你的英语能力呢?</span><span style="color: black;">一封正式得体的英文求职信和邮件如虎添翼。</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">必定</span>为你的求职加分不少,<span style="color: black;">帮忙</span>你找到心仪的工作!</span>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">先<span style="color: black;">瞧瞧</span>下面的案例有怎么问题吧:</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">To:employer@job-postings_company.ca</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">Subject:re: Job Application</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">Dear employer,</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">Look at my resume and cover letter. It’ll tell you all about me. I really want this job.</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">点评:上面的案例有什么问题呢?</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">内容还算OK,毕竟把简历 (resume) 和求职信 (cover letter) 附上了,让HR<span style="color: black;">晓得</span>了你是谁。不足的是<span style="color: black;">不足</span>正式和<span style="color: black;">仔细</span>。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">况且</span>用词太<span style="color: black;">白话</span>化,<span style="color: black;">无</span>说明你申请的职位。语言和内容还<span style="color: black;">不足</span>专业。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">你会想,什么? 邮件<span style="color: black;">亦</span><span style="color: black;">需求</span>正式?</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">确实是!在求职和工作时,<span style="color: black;">运用</span>得体的邮件对你的职业发展很重要。沟通能力在任何组织都是被看重的。你需要准确无误地传达信息,表达你的观点,给他人留下好印象。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">在工作时,你的邮件<span style="color: black;">便是</span>你的名片,在求职时尤其如此。求职邮件关系到雇主对你的<span style="color: black;">第1</span>印象。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">一次匆忙草率的书写,<span style="color: black;">例如</span>上面的例子会让雇主觉得你不专业,很懒惰。<span style="color: black;">她们</span>心里会嘀咕:“<span style="color: black;">倘若</span>在求职<span style="color: black;">时期</span>你都不花些时间展示自己?还要<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>猜你申请的是什么职位。那<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>录用你以后能指望你做什么呢?”</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">其实,花不了多<span style="color: black;">长期</span>就<span style="color: black;">能够</span>写出正式得体的英文求职邮件。下面有<span style="color: black;">有些</span>小的<span style="color: black;">意见</span>:</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">详细</span>精确</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">你申请的是一个特定的职位。对你<span style="color: black;">来讲</span>这是你的中心,<span style="color: black;">然则</span>雇主会在同一时间发布<span style="color: black;">非常多</span>职位招聘。<span style="color: black;">她们</span>会收到<span style="color: black;">海量</span>的求职邮件,而<span style="color: black;">不仅</span>是你那一封信。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">因此</span>写明你要申请的职位,便于<span style="color: black;">她们</span><span style="color: black;">归类</span>及<span style="color: black;">认识</span>你的<span style="color: black;">状况</span>。在标题行写发邮件的目的,标注在招聘启示中的职位名和编号。你<span style="color: black;">能够</span>写成:“Job Application Enclosed: position, reference ”</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">这个<span style="color: black;">亦</span><span style="color: black;">能够</span>写在邮件正文前言。你<span style="color: black;">能够</span>在标头重复标题的内容。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">运用</span>商务英语文体</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">在标头后的正文部分,请务必<span style="color: black;">运用</span>正式的商务英语文体,切忌用词太过<span style="color: black;">白话</span>化。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">最少</span>,将最<span style="color: black;">起始</span>列出的英文邮件案例转变为下面的例子:</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">Dear Employer,</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">I am very interested in applying for the xxx position you advertised on xxx recently. My qualifications and experience match your specifications almost exactly.</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">Please take a moment to review my attached Application Documents:</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">- Up-To-Date Resume</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">- Customized Cover Letter</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">It would be a sincere pleasure to hear back from you soon to discuss this exciting opportunity.</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">Sincerely,</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"></span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">这般</span>就够了吗?</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">英文求职邮件文体正式,注明所申请职位,说明所附附件。正文部分需要<span style="color: black;">重视</span>什么呢?</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">有些</span>求职者会在正文部分附上正式诚恳的求职信和简历。<span style="color: black;">这般</span>以便雇主不打开附件就<span style="color: black;">能够</span><span style="color: black;">容易</span>读取你的信息。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">这般</span>的做法很用心。<span style="color: black;">不外</span><span style="color: black;">必定</span><span style="color: black;">亦</span>要记得将简历和求职信以附件的形式发送。<span style="color: black;">这般</span>方便HR打印<span style="color: black;">关联</span>的文件。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">你<span style="color: black;">亦</span><span style="color: black;">能够</span>尽力找出收件人的姓名和职位。这不是必要项,<span style="color: black;">不外</span>这<span style="color: black;">能够</span>凸显出你对这份工作的热情,让你在众多的求职者中脱颖而出。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">怎样</span>用英语进行一分钟自我介绍?这份有用的模板让<span style="color: black;">非常多</span>人受益匪浅</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">要去应聘和英语<span style="color: black;">关联</span>的工作,<span style="color: black;">例如</span>去培训学校当英语老师,去外企当国际专员,<span style="color: black;">或</span>到外贸<span style="color: black;">机构</span>应聘外贸业务员,少不了<span style="color: black;">白话</span>面试,<span style="color: black;">非常多</span><span style="color: black;">朋友</span>都惧怕<span style="color: black;">白话</span><span style="color: black;">交流</span>,其实<span style="color: black;">把握</span><span style="color: black;">办法</span>和技巧,还是很简单的。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">在提问其它问题之前,英语面试官<span style="color: black;">通常</span>都会说:could you please make a brief self-introduction in one minute?有时候<span style="color: black;">亦</span>会说could you please introduce yourself to us in one minute?意思是,你能<span style="color: black;">不可</span>简单地进行一分钟自我介绍?<span style="color: black;">非常多</span><span style="color: black;">朋友</span>竟然听不出make introduction 是什么意思!</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">单词introduction 意思是“介绍”,动词introduce的名词形式,而make self-introduction<span style="color: black;">便是</span>做自我介绍,以后听到要<span style="color: black;">晓得</span>哦!</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">怎样</span>用英语一分钟自我介绍呢?<span style="color: black;">非常多</span><span style="color: black;">朋友</span>都犯难了!一分钟说长不长,说短<span style="color: black;">亦</span><span style="color: black;">持续</span>,<span style="color: black;">倘若</span>你仅仅懂得说my name is .. I come from .. <span style="color: black;">而后</span>就<span style="color: black;">无</span>话可说了,毫无疑问,面试官觉得你英语不行,招聘你进来,还要帮你<span style="color: black;">加强</span>英语,对<span style="color: black;">她们</span><span style="color: black;">来讲</span>,成本太高了!基本上无心继续面试你,<span style="color: black;">而后</span>草草打发你,你就失去了录用的机会!</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">因此</span>说,懂得进行一分钟自我介绍,太重要了!<span style="color: black;">咱们</span><span style="color: black;">按照</span><span style="color: black;">数年</span>的面试经验,准备了一份“一分钟面试模板”,会让英语面试官眼前一亮!<span style="color: black;">非常多</span>求职的<span style="color: black;">朋友</span>都从这份模板中受益,反馈很不错。这份自我介绍模板如下:</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">Thank you very much for giving me this opportunity to have the job interview. I would like to introduce myself to you briefly. My name is.. ( 姓名). Im .. (年龄)years old, graduated from .. (学校). I specialize in..(专业),minor in (辅修). I have ..(工作年限)years work experience. I once worked as a .. (职务) in .. (<span style="color: black;">机构</span>名<span style="color: black;">叫作</span>) company. I was in charge of sth(负责的工作). Because of some (离职<span style="color: black;">原由</span>)reasons, I quit my last job. Im a hardworking, energetic .. (自己的性格特点)person. During my spare time , I like ..(<span style="color: black;">兴趣</span>). Im quite interested in ..(求职职位), so I applied for this job. I sincerely hope to get the chance to work for your company, so that I can promote myself and make my contributions to the company. I believe that God helps those who help themselves.(适当的引用<span style="color: black;">有些</span>名言,<span style="color: black;">显示</span>自己的决心). Im ready for this challenging job. Thanks for your attention.</span></p>
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b1gc8v 发表于 2024-9-30 02:41:12

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7wu1wm0 发表于 2024-10-18 22:14:28

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