上海中考英语145之作文低档变A档篇：学生做家务之我见
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">上海中考英语145（助力高中）免费助力上海学生中考英语达成145分以上，重点突破与达成以下<span style="color: black;">目的</span>：</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">1.听说测试达到满分（复述与表达），</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">2. 写作达到A档18分以上</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">3. 听力语法词汇阅读达到扣分2分以内</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">4. 为高中四大题型打<span style="color: black;">基本</span>（翻译与概要写作、语法填空，词汇填空和完形填空）</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">提示：</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">（1）上海中考听说测试2023年<span style="color: black;">起始</span>将从<span style="color: black;">日前</span>的10分<span style="color: black;">增多</span>到15-20分，用来筛选学生的意图更<span style="color: black;">显著</span>。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">（2）上海初中英语从2023年<span style="color: black;">起始</span>将改版，<span style="color: black;">日前</span>用了将近20年的牛津教材将<span style="color: black;">作为</span>历史，而高中教材已于2020年率先改版，对学生的能力<span style="color: black;">需求</span>更上一个台阶。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">今天<span style="color: black;">起始</span>发几位<span style="color: black;">基本</span>薄弱初三学生的作文修改（坐标：杨浦区内最底层的学校之一，定位：100-110）</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">仅有</span>同辈作文，<span style="color: black;">才可</span>深有感触；<span style="color: black;">仅有</span>对比原文和我的修改稿，<span style="color: black;">才可</span>懂得写作之道。请<span style="color: black;">爱惜</span>最最最干货！</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"> My opinion on doing housework</strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">修改前：</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">As we all know its necessary for us to do housework. Such as cleaning your room, tidying the desk. In my opinion, teenagers should do more housework. First it can make us be more responsible and careful people. It can also lighten the burden on family. Most importantly, it can feel at a loss when we face some problems in the future. Let‘s do housework!</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">修改后：</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">Different people have different opinions about students doing housework. Some people think it is a good way to develop our abilities and qualities(能力和品格）. Others think doing housework is just a waste of time.</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">In my opinion, doing housework is meaningful. First, most chores (杂务）like taking out the trash and washing the dishes are both easy things to do. At the same time, we can learn about responsibility and independence from doing the housework. In addition, after a busy day, our parents must be very tired. The more housework we do, the more time our parents havefor relaxing. In a word, I think it is of great help for students to do some housework.</p>
你的话语如春风拂面，温暖了我的心房，真的很感谢。 你的话深深触动了我，仿佛说出了我心里的声音。
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