第25讲 撰写演讲稿
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">【</span><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">教育</span><span style="color: black;">目的</span>】</span></strong></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">1.<span style="color: black;">熟练</span>演讲稿的写作特点。</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">2.能<span style="color: black;">按照</span><span style="color: black;">详细</span><span style="color: black;">状况</span>撰写适当的演讲稿。</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">3.能<span style="color: black;">知道</span>清晰地表达自己的观点。</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">【<span style="color: black;">教育</span>重点】</span></strong></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">1.能<span style="color: black;">按照</span><span style="color: black;">详细</span><span style="color: black;">状况</span>撰写适当的演讲稿。</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">2.能<span style="color: black;">知道</span>清晰地表达自己的观点。</span></span></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">【<span style="color: black;">教育</span>过程】</span></strong><span style="color: black;">（1）</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">导语 （1</span><span style="color: black;">）</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">活动一 感受课文的特点（16</span><span style="color: black;">）</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">1.快速阅读《最后一次演讲》师生共同完成相应表格的填写。</span>（8<span style="color: black;">）</span></span></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">课文题目</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">作者</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">听众对象</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">开头<span style="color: black;">办法</span></span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">观点和思路</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">结语</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">语言特点</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">最后一次演讲</span></span></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">爱国学生、进步人士和<span style="color: black;">百姓</span>党特务。</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">开门见山，直接指责<span style="color: black;">百姓</span>党特务的暗杀行径。</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">观点：揭露并痛斥了<span style="color: black;">百姓</span>党反动派制造白色恐怖、无耻暗杀进步人士的法西斯罪行，揭示了反动派必然灭亡、人民必定胜利的真理，表现了演讲者不畏强暴、<span style="color: black;">保持</span>正义的斗争精神以及革命<span style="color: black;">阳光</span>主义态度。思路：先是交代了演讲的题目和背景，<span style="color: black;">而后</span>痛斥了反动派的罪行，接着号召人民起来斗争，最后表达了对胜利的<span style="color: black;">自信心</span>。</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">咱们</span>随时准备像李先生<span style="color: black;">同样</span>，前脚跨出<span style="color: black;">前门</span>，后脚就不准备再跨进<span style="color: black;">前门</span>。</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">白话</span>化；<span style="color: black;">剧烈</span>的感情色彩；<span style="color: black;">海量</span>运用排比、对比、反复等修辞手法；句式灵活，简短有力；人<span style="color: black;">叫作</span>不断变化，指向<span style="color: black;">非常</span><span style="color: black;">知道</span>。</span></span></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">要点提示</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">（1）对演讲的观点和思路做进一步梳理。</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">（2）对演讲语言的特点做<span style="color: black;">详细</span>分析。</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">【<span style="color: black;">精细</span>点拨】一篇好的演讲稿<span style="color: black;">表现</span>在以下几个方面：一是有<span style="color: black;">知道</span>的听众对象，即要讲给谁听的，听众的年龄、身份、文化程度、心理<span style="color: black;">需要</span>等有什么特点，以此来确定演讲的主题、内容和语言风格，<span style="color: black;">才可</span>吸引听众。二是有<span style="color: black;">知道</span>的观点，并能<span style="color: black;">根据</span><span style="color: black;">必定</span>的思路把自己的观点清晰地表达出来，让人一听就明白演讲者的主张。三是语言与写<span style="color: black;">通常</span><span style="color: black;">文案</span>有所区别。句式上要多用短句，少用长句；词语上要<span style="color: black;">尽可能</span>多用<span style="color: black;">白话</span>词，少用书面词，要避免同音词可能带来的口头歧义；引用诗词、古语、典故要<span style="color: black;">尽可能</span><span style="color: black;">选取</span><span style="color: black;">大众</span>熟知的等。</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">2.以小组为单位完成《应有格物致知精神》（丁肇中）和《我<span style="color: black;">一辈子</span>中的重要抉择》（王选）相应表格的填写。</span>（8<span style="color: black;">）</span></span></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">课文题目</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">作者</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">听众对象</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">开头<span style="color: black;">办法</span></span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">观点和思路</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">结语</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">语言特点</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">应有格物致知精神</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">丁肇中</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">从获奖引入教育问题，从传统教育引出“格物致知”。</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">期盼</span><span style="color: black;">咱们</span>这一代对格物致知有新认识和思考，使得实验精神真正<span style="color: black;">作为</span>中国文化的一部分。</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">我<span style="color: black;">一辈子</span>中的重要抉择</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">王选</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">青年大学生</span></span></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">3.课后独立或合作完成《庆祝奥林匹克运动复兴25周年》（顾拜旦）相应表格的填写。</span></span></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">课文题目</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">作者</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">听众对象</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">开头<span style="color: black;">办法</span></span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">观点和思路</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">结语</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">语言特点</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">庆祝奥林匹克运动复兴25周年</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">顾拜旦</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">富有历史感，<span style="color: black;">表现</span>多元文化，洋溢着赞美和激励，充满了期许和创新。</span></span></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">活动二 把握演讲稿的特点（6</span><span style="color: black;">）</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">阅读《撰写演讲稿》（P94），讨论并总结撰写演讲稿的技巧。</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">1.阅读教材内容，独立概括总结。</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">2.和<span style="color: black;">朋友</span><span style="color: black;">一块</span>交流、讨论，<span style="color: black;">一起</span>概括总结。</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">要点提示</span></strong><span style="color: black;"> 写一篇好的演讲稿，需要从以下几个方面着手。1.心中要有听众, 满足听众<span style="color: black;">需要</span>。2.<span style="color: black;">重视</span>写好开头，吸引听众关注。3.<span style="color: black;">知道</span>表达观点，展示演讲思路。4.精心设计结语，<span style="color: black;">提高</span>演讲效果。5.着力锤炼语言，鼓动感染听众。</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">【<span style="color: black;">精细</span>点拨】演讲稿不只<span style="color: black;">能够</span>“读”还<span style="color: black;">能够</span>“讲”，<span style="color: black;">况且</span>是“演讲”，即要用丰富生动的表情、动作等态势语言<span style="color: black;">协同</span>特定的语气、语速、声高、音量等来传递演讲者的观点和情感，以充分唤醒听众的共鸣。</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">活动三 学写演讲稿（22</span><span style="color: black;">）</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">以《书香，伴我成长》为题写一篇演讲稿。</span></span></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">（1）听众对象是<span style="color: black;">那些</span>人？<span style="color: black;">怎样</span>满足听众<span style="color: black;">需要</span>？</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">（2）<span style="color: black;">怎么样</span>写一个好的开头，让演讲一<span style="color: black;">起始</span>就能够吸引听众？</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">（3）你想要表达出什么样的观点？<span style="color: black;">根据</span>什么思路把自己的观点表达清楚？</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">（4）设计什么样的结束语或向听众发出什么样的号召？</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">（5）<span style="color: black;">怎么样</span>让你的语言更有说服力、感染力和鼓动性？</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">1.独立思考上面的问题，列出简要的提纲。</span>（17<span style="color: black;">）</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">（1）用简要的语言回答上面的问题，<span style="color: black;">尤其</span>是要把自己的观点说清楚，最好从<span style="color: black;">区别</span>的<span style="color: black;">方向</span>表达自己的观点<span style="color: black;">或</span>分层次表达自己的观点。</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">（2）把表达自己观点的句子、结束语和<span style="color: black;">每一个</span>段落的中心句完整地写出来，并批注出态势语言和语气、语速等内容。</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">2.和<span style="color: black;">朋友</span>交流、讨论各自想法，<span style="color: black;">遵循</span>别人的意见、<span style="color: black;">意见</span>。</span>（3<span style="color: black;">）</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">3.学习、借鉴他人的长处或课文内容的特点，用批注的方式对自己的写作提纲进行修改。</span>（2<span style="color: black;">）</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">活动四 写作实践（43）</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">以《书香，伴我成长》为题，进一步<span style="color: black;">知道</span>观点主张，梳理表达思路，锤炼作品语言，完成演讲稿的写作。</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">1.独立写作</span></strong><span style="color: black;">（33）</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">2.自评（5）</span></strong></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">（1）用批注的方式标明表达自己观点的句子、结束语和<span style="color: black;">每一个</span>段落的中心句。（2）用批注的形式标明自己作品的语言特点。</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">（3）用批注的方式注明你准备<span style="color: black;">运用</span>的表情、动作等态势语言以及在表达特定内容时的语气、语速、声高、音量等。</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">3.互评（5）</span></strong></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">请<span style="color: black;">朋友</span>对你的作品进行<span style="color: black;">评估</span>并提出修改意见和<span style="color: black;">意见</span>。</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">作业（2）</span></strong></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">1.修改完善作品。</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">2.每周写（修改）不少于5篇演讲稿。</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">（1）每篇不少于500字。</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">（2）<span style="color: black;">重视</span>围绕<span style="color: black;">区别</span>的主题、面向<span style="color: black;">区别</span>的听众准备演讲。</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">（3）<span style="color: black;">重视</span>采用<span style="color: black;">区别</span>的语言风格准备演讲。</span></span></p>
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