写作｜书看了非常多，为么还是不会写？这种能力比阅读更重要
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>写作<span style="color: black;">哪些</span>事儿| 字800 阅读时长约5分钟</p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">你好！这一期<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>又来聊作文啦！<span style="color: black;">为何</span>？<span style="color: black;">由于</span>暑假马上要结束啦，总要来个假期总结，看<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>读了多少书。更重要的是：既然读了这么多书，新学期的作文课<span style="color: black;">必定</span><span style="color: black;">不消</span>发愁了吧！<span style="color: black;">然则</span>，可能，结果……却不像<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>想的<span style="color: black;">那样</span>完美！</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">于是，不得不感叹：<span style="color: black;">为何</span>读了<span style="color: black;">那样</span>多书，还是写不出来呢？其实，这个问题，<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>在很早很早之前的<span style="color: black;">文案</span>里<span style="color: black;">亦</span>给你说过了哦！不是读的多，就能写的好，<span style="color: black;">倘若</span>少了这一点，读再多，<span style="color: black;">道理</span><span style="color: black;">亦</span>不是<span style="color: black;">尤其</span>大！这个比阅读更重要的点<span style="color: black;">便是</span>：要让<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>学会观察！</span></p>
<div style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/tos-cn-i-qvj2lq49k0/193913df3c414a3e8785081da2d58d00~noop.image?_iz=58558&from=article.pc_detail&lk3s=953192f4&x-expires=1728723529&x-signature=7KCXv4JmOnB%2BzWs5UK2yLhuWGDE%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></div>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">对，<span style="color: black;">便是</span>观察！怎么观察？之前介绍写作的文里，咱们<span style="color: black;">说到</span>了：感官<span style="color: black;">霸占</span>写作法！<span style="color: black;">亦</span><span style="color: black;">便是</span>备受<span style="color: black;">大众</span>推崇的：五感写作法！嗯，<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>看问题，<span style="color: black;">不但</span><span style="color: black;">能够</span>从<span style="color: black;">起始</span>到结束，还<span style="color: black;">能够</span>换个<span style="color: black;">方向</span>从“结果”来推导“<span style="color: black;">起始</span>”。既然，<span style="color: black;">能够</span>用五感写作，那<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>观察<span style="color: black;">为何</span><span style="color: black;">不可</span>用这个<span style="color: black;">办法</span>来观察呢？</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">五感写作，不<span style="color: black;">便是</span>把<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>的眼睛、鼻子、嘴巴、耳朵、手指所看到、听到、闻到和触摸到的东西写到纸上吗？<span style="color: black;">因此</span>，在<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>读书的时候，<span style="color: black;">能够</span>告诉<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>，要留意<span style="color: black;">哪些</span>好的段落，作者是用了什么样的结构、用了什么观察<span style="color: black;">办法</span>（五感的哪一感或几感）。不仅是读书的时候，带<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>出去散步、逛公园、去超市，看到花草、货架上的<span style="color: black;">果蔬</span>蔬菜，都<span style="color: black;">能够</span>试着让<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>用五感法观察。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">然则</span>，有了五感观察法，并不是一切万事大吉哦！千万别忘了，在观察的<span style="color: black;">同期</span>，要让<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>把咱们之前说的：形容词、比喻、拟人，诗词引用，都用起来。<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>来举个例子吧：</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">超市里的芒果<span style="color: black;">尤其</span>诱人，看起来很好吃的样子。下面用“五感观察法”<span style="color: black;">起始</span>啦：</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">A：芒果放在货架上，我凑上去闻了闻很香！</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">B：黄橙橙的芒果躺在柔软的棉质上，看着油亮亮的外表，我禁不住伸出手指，可是还<span style="color: black;">无</span>触碰到它的表皮，就有一股自然的甜香隔着皮儿钻进我的鼻子里，我不忍打扰这些小家伙憨态可掬的样子，就缩回手指，让它静静地再睡一会儿吧。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">当<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>调动起五感，你会惊奇地<span style="color: black;">发掘</span>：<span style="color: black;">不仅</span>句子变<span style="color: black;">成为了</span>，字<span style="color: black;">亦</span>变多了，<span style="color: black;">况且</span>重要的是写出来的作文再<span style="color: black;">亦</span>不是干瘪的了！</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">总结：五感观察法+形容词；比喻；拟人！</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">——THE END——</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">预告：有了五感观察法，<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>还要讲讲怎么更进一步去观察，<span style="color: black;">例如</span>重头戏：写景作文怎么写？点击<strong style="color: blue;">【关注】</strong>，咱们下期继续聊聊<strong style="color: blue;">【<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>写作<span style="color: black;">哪些</span>事儿】</strong>之<span style="color: black;">怎样</span>用镜头去写去一篇好的游记！</p>
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