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小学生作文《一次大胆的尝试》,内容诙谐有趣,老师看后想请家长


    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">小学生眼中的世界,与成年人看到的完全<span style="color: black;">区别</span>,小学生思想单纯,想法新颖奇特,常常语出惊人,<span style="color: black;">非常多</span>时候,家长和老师都<span style="color: black;">不可</span><span style="color: black;">即时</span>跟上<span style="color: black;">她们</span>的脑回路。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">这恰恰是学生聪明和想象力丰富的<span style="color: black;">表现</span>,家长和老师要进行正确引导,<span style="color: black;">不可</span>强行<span style="color: black;">控制</span>这种<span style="color: black;">潜能</span>,否则很可能<span style="color: black;">显现</span>适得其反的后果。</p>
    <div style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/91306e3573894958b5272943daa2223a~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1728663454&amp;x-signature=T9F%2FAr0ZXg%2Bu8LyzdXJQI96WpnY%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></div>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">当进入小学后,这些天马行空的想法,会在老师的引导下,进行系统的更正,此时<strong style="color: blue;">学生<span style="color: black;">区别</span>的<span style="color: black;">天分</span><span style="color: black;">逐步</span>彰显出来,</strong><span style="color: black;">例如</span>有的学生酷爱数学,有的学生<span style="color: black;">特别有</span>画画<span style="color: black;">天分</span>,还有的学生文笔强,想象力丰富。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">文笔好的学生,在应试教育下非常吃香,尤其是大作文,在考试中有较高的分数占比,想要作文拿高分,需要从小练习写作技巧,并<span style="color: black;">持续</span><span style="color: black;">累积</span>素材。</p>
    <div style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/c29cc5afb0144215ac087882354c8385~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1728663454&amp;x-signature=UICQY5%2BiGEH8%2FDM4%2FsDIzYBavkQ%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></div>
    <h1 style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;">小学生的零分作文火了,内容新颖意有所指,老师却连墨水分都<span style="color: black;">无</span>给</h1>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">为了让学生有更好的文笔,小学<span style="color: black;">周期</span>,老师就<span style="color: black;">起始</span>尝试引导学生写作文,从最<span style="color: black;">起始</span>简单额看图说话,到后来的命题作文,在这个过程中,学生的写作能力在<span style="color: black;">持续</span><span style="color: black;">加强</span>,写作<span style="color: black;">需求</span>自然<span style="color: black;">亦</span>会越来越多,<span style="color: black;">不外</span>整体来讲,<strong style="color: blue;">小学<span style="color: black;">周期</span>的作文只要不跑题,符合<span style="color: black;">规律</span>,老师为了鼓励学生,分数不会低。</strong></p>
    <div style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><img src="https://p26-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/9194cd2500b64d7b936aaa79b184870c~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1728663454&amp;x-signature=x65DVSAItr%2BFnmkuK%2BjdepSH6Fs%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></div>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">不外</span>凡事无绝对,即便老师<span style="color: black;">需求</span>一再降低,依然有学生在挑战老师的极限,<span style="color: black;">例如</span>这位小学生的任务描写,显然写得是自己的老师,<strong style="color: blue;">一面夸老师长得<span style="color: black;">美丽</span>,另一面却说老师找不到男<span style="color: black;">伴侣</span>,</strong>最后直接扣住主题,想把自己爸爸介绍给老师,老师看后想请家长,一来想<span style="color: black;">瞧瞧</span>这位<span style="color: black;">朋友</span>的爸爸<span style="color: black;">到底</span>有多<span style="color: black;">可靠</span>,二来让爸爸回家好好进行家庭教育,毕竟写作是一件严肃的事,<span style="color: black;">不可</span>天马行空。</p>
    <div style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/d96aaf4ff39f4f84a031ba8259919350~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1728663454&amp;x-signature=B0ZoQpDOWG2VXvsr%2FeeM0sIxMBA%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></div>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">老师让学生写作文,不仅是培养写作能力,还<span style="color: black;">能够</span>培养学生的好奇心,当对身边的事物产生好奇之心后,才会对知识感兴趣,并愿意进行更深层次的<span style="color: black;">科研</span>探讨。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">为了培养学生的想象力,老师<span style="color: black;">亦</span>是用心良苦,这篇半命题作文中,学生<span style="color: black;">能够</span>自由发挥,这位小学生作文名为<strong style="color: blue;">《一次大胆的尝试》</strong>,当看到开头<span style="color: black;">第1</span>句话时,会感觉这是一篇有故事的<span style="color: black;">文案</span>,内容会非常诙谐又有趣,但继续往后看的时候,<span style="color: black;">发掘</span>,<span style="color: black;">所说</span>的大胆的尝试,<span style="color: black;">便是</span>不写了,老师连墨水分都<span style="color: black;">无</span>给,<span style="color: black;">亦</span>确实<span style="color: black;">不该</span>该给,看标题,<strong style="color: blue;">本以为是个王者,没想到连青铜都算不上。</strong></p>
    <div style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/2de51d891ecd4719a757a5b1d28bbca1~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1728663454&amp;x-signature=6yYkAuwSvmDKKb3iOR1KxFzMEvg%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></div>
    <h1 style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;">写作文是一件严肃的事,学生要认真对待</h1>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">小学生<span style="color: black;">处在</span>童言无忌的<span style="color: black;">周期</span>,写出天马行空的文字<span style="color: black;">亦</span>属正常,但如此“大胆的尝试”并不提倡,学习是一件严肃的事情,写作文更要认真,将个人情感真情流露,<span style="color: black;">这般</span><span style="color: black;">才可</span>打动阅卷老师,<span style="color: black;">才可</span>得高分。</p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">曾经有位任性的高考生,在重要的高考面前,却反其道而行,向国人彰显自己的个性,最后作文得0分,最后被现实的社会磨平了棱角,真实案例再告诉<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>,<strong style="color: blue;">在学习面前,<span style="color: black;">咱们</span><span style="color: black;">不可</span>粗心大意,面对考试,更应谨言慎行</strong>。在应试教育下,最忌讳这种大胆又有个性的学生,终究坑害的是自己。</p>
    <div style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/69ebe06190af489998882dfede968f10~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1728663454&amp;x-signature=EfRMaayzDCTke%2B5KoYlrh%2Fx%2B3o4%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></div>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">在学生写作过程中,父母不要<span style="color: black;">忽略</span>家庭教育,<span style="color: black;">非常多</span>时候,<strong style="color: blue;">小学生在作文中的真情流露,是家庭生活的真实写照,</strong>想要学生积极面对学习,父母需要给<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>营造和谐的家庭氛围,养成良好的学习习惯,并树立正确的三观。</p>
    <div style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/32ac9b984bd2482486f8aa024470e40b~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1728663454&amp;x-signature=p9E8fIMSEDHvDzIA4QH%2FfBeodpU%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></div>
    <h1 style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;">学生的成长,需要家长、老师、学校三方合作</h1>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">在学生成长历程中,需要家长、老师、学校三方合作,<span style="color: black;">一起</span><span style="color: black;">奋斗</span>,学校<span style="color: black;">供给</span>场所,为老师和学生制定规则,并进行严格的监督管理,老师尽全力传授知识和学习<span style="color: black;">办法</span>,<strong style="color: blue;">家长在教育过程中,起到辅助<span style="color: black;">功效</span>,但在学生心理健康方面,却起着主导<span style="color: black;">功效</span>,</strong>父母的言行身教,对学生影响很大。</p>
    <div style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/24f376d0625f45119bdab5fc4d9b4d39~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1728663454&amp;x-signature=xScPtIJsu8KSqfRhgx4wsBFAgDc%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></div>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">老师都有一颗“望子成龙,望女成凤”的心,<span style="color: black;">期盼</span><span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>成绩好,将来考入大学,<span style="color: black;">作为</span>社会的栋梁,老师是除了父母之外,最<span style="color: black;">期盼</span><span style="color: black;">她们</span>学习好的人,当面对班级中<span style="color: black;">特别有</span>头脑却不学习的学生,老师真的是恨铁不成钢,<strong style="color: blue;">负责任的老师,会对<span style="color: black;">她们</span>进行严厉批评,<span style="color: black;">期盼</span><span style="color: black;">她们</span>能<span style="color: black;">早点</span>醒悟,</strong>尽早<span style="color: black;">认识</span>到学习的重要,不要将来感到<span style="color: black;">懊悔</span>。</p>
    <div style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><img src="https://p3-sign.toutiaoimg.com/pgc-image/e6bd2c72712648cb802497749fb3afc8~noop.image?_iz=58558&amp;from=article.pc_detail&amp;lk3s=953192f4&amp;x-expires=1728663454&amp;x-signature=zMlv9%2Ftz28r3gb8x6Tq30c6j9a8%3D" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></div>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">其实<span style="color: black;">针对</span>此<span style="color: black;">周期</span>的学生而言,即便有老师的批评、家长的督促,<span style="color: black;">非常多</span>时候<span style="color: black;">她们</span>并<span style="color: black;">不睬</span>解,<span style="color: black;">乃至</span><span style="color: black;">基本</span>听不懂,<span style="color: black;">导致</span>于不少老师好心办了坏事。老师面对<span style="color: black;">区别</span>性格的<span style="color: black;">朋友</span>,需要采用<span style="color: black;">区别</span>的教育方式,<strong style="color: blue;">有时候心理疏导要比严厉的语言更有效果。</strong></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">今日<span style="color: black;">专题</span>:<strong style="color: blue;">你们上学时期,作文有得过零分吗</strong>?</p>
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