让英语作文变成一道靓丽的风景线
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">让</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">英语</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">作文</span></span><span style="color: black;">变成一道靓丽的风景线</span></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">2021<span style="color: black;">年全国新高考</span><span style="color: black;">Ⅰ</span><span style="color: black;">卷英语试题</span><span style="color: black;">(</span><span style="color: black;">鲁粤闽湘鄂苏冀</span><span style="color: black;">)</span><span style="color: black;">加强了对写作能力的考查。写作由原来的</span><span style="color: black;">25</span><span style="color: black;">分</span><span style="color: black;">(</span><span style="color: black;">约占全卷总分值的</span><span style="color: black;">16.67%)</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">提升</span>到</span><span style="color: black;">40</span><span style="color: black;">分</span><span style="color: black;">(</span><span style="color: black;">约占全卷总分值的</span><span style="color: black;">26.67%)</span><span style="color: black;">。写作部分分为应用文写作和读后续写两节。</span></span><span style="color: black;">对考生而言，</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">读后续写</span></span><span style="color: black;">的<span style="color: black;">增多</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">没</span>疑</span></span><span style="color: black;">是</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">个巨大</span></span><span style="color: black;">的</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">挑战。本文</span></span><span style="color: black;">欲</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">谈谈在考试时间紧张<span style="color: black;">状况</span>下，<span style="color: black;">怎样</span>让</span></span><span style="color: black;">高考作文</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">变成一道靓丽的风景线。</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">一.</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">兼顾作文的面子与里子 </span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">为</span><span style="color: black;">兼顾好</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">作文</span></span><span style="color: black;">的</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">面子</span></span><span style="color: black;">与</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">里子</span></span><span style="color: black;">，先来<span style="color: black;">瞧瞧</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">高考评卷</span></span><span style="color: black;">场景：</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">评卷员</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">全神贯注地趴在电脑屏幕前，机械似地打着分，翻着页，再打分，再翻页，</span><span style="color: black;">……</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">一刻<span style="color: black;">亦</span>未停止，似乎没完没了。评卷</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">员</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">每日</span></span><span style="color: black;">要</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">完成<span style="color: black;">必定</span>数量的评卷</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">，</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">就得在较<span style="color: black;">短期</span></span></span><span style="color: black;">内</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">完成一篇作文的</span></span><span style="color: black;">评</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">分。</span></span><span style="color: black;">可想而知</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">，</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">她们</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">紧张、忙碌、辛苦！</span></span><span style="color: black;">这就呼唤</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">考生</span></span><span style="color: black;">要将作文变成</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">一道靓丽的风景线</span></span><span style="color: black;">，</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">呈<span style="color: black;">此刻</span>评卷</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">员</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">的面前，使得<span style="color: black;">她们</span></span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">发自内心地</span></span><span style="color: black;">为之</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">点赞</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">。</span></span><span style="color: black;">这就</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">需求</span>考生既要装点好</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">作文</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">面子</span>, <span style="color: black;">又要精心打造好作文里子。</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">1.</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">装点好作文的面子</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">爱美之心，人皆有之。评卷员当然<span style="color: black;">爱好</span><span style="color: black;">美丽</span></span></span><span style="color: black;">的</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">作文面子。<span style="color: black;">所说</span>作文面子<span style="color: black;">便是</span>作文书写<span style="color: black;">美丽</span></span>(<span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">或</span><span style="color: black;">非常</span>认真</span><span style="color: black;">)+</span><span style="color: black;">排版<span style="color: black;">恰当</span></span><span style="color: black;">+</span><span style="color: black;">卷面整洁干净。</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">高考说明关于书面表达评分标准</span></span><span style="color: black;">早</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">就<span style="color: black;">知道</span>指出：</span><span style="color: black;">“</span><span style="color: black;">如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。</span><span style="color: black;">”</span></span><span style="color: black;"> <span style="color: black;">其实，</span></span><span style="color: black;">在</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">学校平时的期中、</span></span><span style="color: black;">期</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">末考以及</span></span><span style="color: black;">高三的</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">月考中，学生作文<span style="color: black;">显现</span>书写态度差，且</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">有</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">乱涂乱改现象的<span style="color: black;">亦</span>自然会被扣除</span>2</span><span style="color: black;">-</span><span style="color: black;">3<span style="color: black;">分</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">或</span>3-5<span style="color: black;">分不等</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">。<span style="color: black;">因此呢</span>，</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">意见</span></span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">考生</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">重视</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">以下几点。</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">1</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">）</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">让评卷</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">员的眼睛</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">看得舒服。道理非常简单：</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">因为</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">作文答卷是</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">由</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">阅卷</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">员来评判</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">，</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">因此</span></span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">仅有</span>让阅卷</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">员</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">看得舒服、方便、清楚，这才是硬道理</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">。</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">一份</span></span><span style="color: black;">“</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">眉目清秀</span></span><span style="color: black;">”</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">美观、清晰的</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">作文</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">答卷</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">，</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">无</span>理由不</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">让</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">阅卷</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">员为之点赞。</span> </span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">2</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">）</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">不给评卷</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">员</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">多扣分的机会。</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">即使</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">无</span>办法让</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">评卷员</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">为作文</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">加</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">分，</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">最少</span></span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">让</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">评卷员</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">不忍心多扣分，且让<span style="color: black;">她们</span>愿意多看一眼你的作文。作文</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">誊写到</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">答卷</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">上时</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">应该讲究布局排版，</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">框架</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">清晰</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">，</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">段落分明。</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">另外</span>，</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">字写得差一点<span style="color: black;">无</span>关系，<span style="color: black;">然则</span>绝不<span style="color: black;">能够</span></span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">敷衍、</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">潦草。要让阅卷</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">员</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">看得清清楚楚，并留下一种</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">如是的</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">印象：虽然书写<span style="color: black;">不良</span>，<span style="color: black;">然则</span></span></span><span style="color: black;">认真的</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">态度令人折服。</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">3</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">）</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">字迹<span style="color: black;">体积</span>和</span></span><span style="color: black;">词</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">距均匀</span></span><span style="color: black;">很</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">要紧</span>。</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">词</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">写得太大，</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">或</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">许答题区域<span style="color: black;">不足</span></span></span><span style="color: black;">容纳</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">作文答题</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">；</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">写</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">得太小，阅卷</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">员</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">看起来</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">会</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">非常</span>吃力、费眼。<span style="color: black;">因此呢</span>，<span style="color: black;">每一个</span>词都应该<span style="color: black;">体积</span>适中，词与词之间的距离<span style="color: black;">平衡</span>，不要时宽时窄；<span style="color: black;">重视</span><span style="color: black;">掌控</span>好</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">字母的</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">上行与下行笔画，如</span>b, d, h, k, l, t<span style="color: black;">等不要太向上延伸，</span></span><span style="color: black;">而</span><span style="color: black;">g, j, p, q, y<span style="color: black;">等</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">不要</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">太向下延伸，</span>f<span style="color: black;">不要</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">随意</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">上下延伸，使得行与行之间<span style="color: black;">无</span>空隙</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">距离</span></span><span style="color: black;">之感</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">，<span style="color: black;">这般</span></span></span><span style="color: black;">一来，作文</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">卷面的美观度会被大打折扣。<span style="color: black;">另一</span>，笔画宜写实避虚，切记不可用铅笔</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">做</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">答，否则，扫描</span></span><span style="color: black;">的</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">作文</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">会模糊不清</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">。</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">总之，十</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">余</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">年的寒窗苦读</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">“</span><span style="color: black;">成果</span><span style="color: black;">”</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">最后</span></span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">就<span style="color: black;">表现</span>在答题卡上，<span style="color: black;">因此</span><span style="color: black;">没</span>论怎么认真书写答题都不</span></span><span style="color: black;">为过</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">。</span></span><span style="color: black;">要让</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">作文卷面<span style="color: black;">作为</span>一道</span></span><span style="color: black;">“</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">秀色可餐</span></span><span style="color: black;">”</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">的</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">风景线，</span></span><span style="color: black;">请</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">养成以下良好习惯</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">：</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">1)</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">平时练习</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">誊写</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">作文讲究速度，快中求</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">美</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">；</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">2)</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">平时考</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">作文正式上答题卡前，</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">最好能</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">打草稿；</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">3)</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">平日</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">练字和作业</span></span><span style="color: black;">考试的</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">书写态度要<span style="color: black;">同样</span></span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">认真；</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">4)</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">书写</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">讲究</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">版</span></span><span style="color: black;">面</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">设计，</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">单词移行正确</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">，卷面</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">保持干净</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">。</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">2.</span><span style="color: black;">打造好</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">作文</span></span><span style="color: black;">的</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">里子</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">作文</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">里子是评分</span></span><span style="color: black;">的</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">重点</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">。</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">所说</span>作文里子<span style="color: black;">指的是</span>作文内容</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">完整</span><span style="color: black;">+</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">正能</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">量</span>+<span style="color: black;">少</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">/</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">零语言错误</span>+<span style="color: black;">表</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">现手法多</span></span><span style="color: black;">样</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">。</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">因此呢</span>，请<span style="color: black;">留意</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">以下参考</span></span><span style="color: black;">意见</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">。</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">1</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">）</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">避免单词拼写错误</span> </span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">单词拼写错误是大忌，<span style="color: black;">必要</span>避免低级错误。<span style="color: black;">所说</span>低级错误<span style="color: black;">指的是</span>常用词</span></span><span style="color: black;">(</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">包含</span>不规则动词</span></span><span style="color: black;">等</span><span style="color: black;">)</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">的拼写错误。如</span>thought<span style="color: black;">写成</span><span style="color: black;">thinked</span></span><span style="color: black;">；</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">receive</span><span style="color: black;">写成</span><span style="color: black;">recieve</span><span style="color: black;">。</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">单词</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">(</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">组</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">)</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">是写<span style="color: black;">文案</span>的基本材料，通俗</span></span><span style="color: black;">而言</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">，</span></span><span style="color: black;">它们</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">与<span style="color: black;">文案</span>的关系就<span style="color: black;">好似</span>水泥和砖瓦与造房子的关系<span style="color: black;">同样</span>。<span style="color: black;">无</span>词汇作<span style="color: black;">基本</span>，写作举步艰难。词汇量</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">越</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">大，<span style="color: black;">尤其</span>是同义词，近义表达法<span style="color: black;">把握</span>得</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">越</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">多</span></span><span style="color: black;">，</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">写起<span style="color: black;">文案</span>来，就能灵活多变。</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">多记同</span></span><span style="color: black;">、</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">近义</span></span><span style="color: black;">表达方式</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">尤其</span>有益于概要写作。</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">2</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">）</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">巧妙运用色彩斑斓的句式句型</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">巧妙运用色彩斑斓的句式句型。要写好<span style="color: black;">文案</span>得</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">先</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">从句子</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">入</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">手，写好句子的<span style="color: black;">重要</span></span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">又</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">在于<span style="color: black;">选择</span>恰当的句型</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">。</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">那样</span>，</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">正确与地道的句型从何</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">而</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">来，靠平时模仿</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">佳作</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">范文，熟读</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">能背教材</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">课文</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">片段</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">，</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">还要</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">多记句型（如</span>when it comes to…<span style="color: black;">）。<span style="color: black;">把握</span>的句型多了，<span style="color: black;">尤其</span>是替代句型丰富了，写起<span style="color: black;">文案</span>来就会有一种</span><span style="color: black;">“</span><span style="color: black;">天高任鸟飞，海阔凭鱼跃</span><span style="color: black;">”</span><span style="color: black;">的感觉。</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">3</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">）</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">点缀</span></span><span style="color: black;">丰富</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">多彩的语法知识</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">点缀多姿多彩的语法知识。当然，<span style="color: black;">首要</span>要尽力避免语法错误。在写作中，常犯的语法错误可能是<span style="color: black;">文案</span></span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">行文的不一致性，<span style="color: black;">包含</span></span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">人<span style="color: black;">叫作</span>、时态、主谓</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">、</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">修饰词等</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">的不一致性，以及犯名词单复数、代词格的变化和冠词<span style="color: black;">运用</span>等错误。恰当运用从句来修饰主、宾、表等句子<span style="color: black;">成分</span>，或在文中点缀<span style="color: black;">有些</span></span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">非谓语动词形式</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">(</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">此刻</span>分词、过去分词、不定式</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">)</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">、倒装、感叹</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">、</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">独立主格</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">等</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">，<span style="color: black;">文案</span>会<span style="color: black;">显出</span>更有</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">色</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">采。</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">4</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">）</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">区别</span>的文体行文风格有别</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">审题是写作，尤其是应用文写作的<span style="color: black;">重要</span>所在。<span style="color: black;">区别</span>的应用文文体有着<span style="color: black;">区别</span>的行文和用词风格。以</span>2020<span style="color: black;">年全国高考卷为例，写作体裁多样，新高考</span><span style="color: black;">Ⅰ</span><span style="color: black;">是</span><span style="color: black;">“</span><span style="color: black;">活动<span style="color: black;">报告</span></span><span style="color: black;">”</span><span style="color: black;">，课标全国</span><span style="color: black;">Ⅰ</span><span style="color: black;">是</span><span style="color: black;">“</span><span style="color: black;">参赛作文</span><span style="color: black;">”</span><span style="color: black;">，课标全国</span><span style="color: black;">Ⅱ</span><span style="color: black;">是</span><span style="color: black;">“</span><span style="color: black;">活动介绍</span><span style="color: black;">”</span><span style="color: black;">，而课标全国</span><span style="color: black;">Ⅲ</span><span style="color: black;">则是</span><span style="color: black;">“</span><span style="color: black;">求助信</span><span style="color: black;">”</span><span style="color: black;">。即使<span style="color: black;">便是</span>书信，种类<span style="color: black;">亦</span>多样：申请信、<span style="color: black;">通知</span>信、<span style="color: black;">意见</span>信、道歉信等。<span style="color: black;">区别</span>种类的信件，<span style="color: black;">触及</span>到<span style="color: black;">区别</span>写信人与收信人之间的关系，这种<span style="color: black;">区别</span>关系就<span style="color: black;">触及</span>到信件的有别开头的方式，写作的<span style="color: black;">招数</span><span style="color: black;">亦</span><span style="color: black;">区别</span>。例如：写邀请信的四个要素是：</span><span style="color: black;">1) </span><span style="color: black;">开篇发出邀请 </span><span style="color: black;">2) </span><span style="color: black;">介绍邀请参加的活动</span><span style="color: black;">(</span><span style="color: black;">内容、地点时间、<span style="color: black;">重视</span>事项</span><span style="color: black;">) 3)</span><span style="color: black;">夸赞对方 </span><span style="color: black;">4)</span><span style="color: black;">信尾再次发出邀请；<span style="color: black;">能够</span>参考的优秀句式有：</span><span style="color: black;">1) I’m writing to tell you that we intend to... and I sincerely invite you to do ... with us on behalf of ...</span><span style="color: black;">；</span><span style="color: black;">2) Your participation is sure to add color to ... and we are all looking forward to your involvement.</span><span style="color: black;">。</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">5</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">）</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">运用舒适流畅手法连接全文</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">运用舒适流畅的上下文连接手段。句与句间的连接<span style="color: black;">常常</span>是被忽略的一个问题，</span></span><span style="color: black;">例</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">如有人在文中<span style="color: black;">这般</span>写道：</span>The old man has two sons, both of them are doctors. <span style="color: black;">表面上看去，这</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">样</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">表达完美<span style="color: black;">没</span>缺</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">。</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">其实，这两个简单句之间应该用并列连词</span>and<span style="color: black;">连接；或</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">将</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">第二个简单句变成定语从句：</span>both of whom are doctors<span style="color: black;">；或把<span style="color: black;">第1</span>个简单句后面的逗号</span></span><span style="color: black;">“</span><span style="color: black;">,</span><span style="color: black;">”</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">改成</span></span><span style="color: black;">分号</span><span style="color: black;">“</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">;</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">”</span><span style="color: black;">。总之，为了<span style="color: black;">增多</span>全文的流畅度与舒适度，要善于运用<span style="color: black;">有些</span><span style="color: black;">平常</span>的、<span style="color: black;">区别</span>种类的连词，如表并列的</span><span style="color: black;">and, </span><span style="color: black;">表因果的</span><span style="color: black;">as a result, </span><span style="color: black;">表转折的</span><span style="color: black;">otherwise, </span><span style="color: black;">表递进的</span><span style="color: black;">also, </span><span style="color: black;">表<span style="color: black;">次序</span>的</span><span style="color: black;">first…last</span><span style="color: black;">等。</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">6<span style="color: black;">）</span></span><span style="color: black;">文中</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">各个环节高度契合</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">读后续写</span></span><span style="color: black;">强调<span style="color: black;">文案</span>各个环节的</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">高度契合</span></span><span style="color: black;">，<span style="color: black;">尤其</span>是以下</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">四个</span></span><span style="color: black;">环节点：</span><span style="color: black;">1<span style="color: black;">）</span></span><span style="color: black;">续写</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">第1</span>段开头句与所给的<span style="color: black;">第1</span>句</span></span><span style="color: black;">的</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">高度契合；</span>2<span style="color: black;">）</span></span><span style="color: black;">续写</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">第1</span>段结尾自然</span></span><span style="color: black;">要</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">对接所给的第二句，</span></span><span style="color: black;">并</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">与之</span></span><span style="color: black;">高度</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">契合；</span>3<span style="color: black;">）</span></span><span style="color: black;">续写</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">第二段开头句要与第二个所给句高度融合；</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">4</span><span style="color: black;">）<span style="color: black;">文案</span></span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">结尾</span></span><span style="color: black;">不仅要</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">圆满<span style="color: black;">处理</span></span></span><span style="color: black;">原</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">故事材料中所<span style="color: black;">显现</span>的矛盾点（或冲突点），</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">况且</span><span style="color: black;">需求</span>其</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">升华</span></span><span style="color: black;">部分</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">与所给故事内容以及续写故事内容</span></span><span style="color: black;">要</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">高度融合。</span></span><span style="color: black;">如</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">所给故事讲述</span></span><span style="color: black;">“</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">两位好友因某事而闹得</span></span><span style="color: black;">互不</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">理会对方</span></span><span style="color: black;">”</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">。考生就该围绕</span></span><span style="color: black;">这一线索<span style="color: black;">恰当</span>展开续写，<span style="color: black;">结果</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">让双方重归于好。</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">7<span style="color: black;">）</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">涵盖写作提示所<span style="color: black;">需求</span>的<span style="color: black;">重要</span>内容</span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">涵盖</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">所</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">提示</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">的</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">重要</span>内容是</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">应用文</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">写作评分的<span style="color: black;">重要</span>。<span style="color: black;">因此呢</span>，</span></span><span style="color: black;">动笔</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">前要仔细审题，观察到位，<span style="color: black;">而后</span>把所有的内容，<span style="color: black;">尤其</span>是要点要<span style="color: black;">陈列</span>出来，切不可丢三落四，或写作的内容与所<span style="color: black;">供给</span>的写作要求不符。<span style="color: black;">另一</span>，<span style="color: black;">文案</span>要开好头，<span style="color: black;">而后</span>围绕</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">主题</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">发展其内容，最后应</span></span><span style="color: black;">该</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">有简明</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">的归纳</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">总结，如</span></span><span style="color: black;">在书信类结尾</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">表现</span></span></span><span style="color: black;">出</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">人文</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">情怀</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">，</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">这</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">能拉近</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">作者</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">与</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">读者，即</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">评卷</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">员</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">情感上的距离</span></span><span style="color: black;">。</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">这般</span>的<span style="color: black;">文案</span></span></span><span style="color: black;">自然</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">会给</span></span><span style="color: black;">读者</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">留下美好</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">深刻的</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">印象</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">。</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">总之，</span></span><span style="color: black;">应用文写作</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">要</span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">涵盖内容，</span></span><span style="color: black;">适当拓展，</span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">中心<span style="color: black;">明显</span>，层次分明。</span></span></p>
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