小学部编三年级上1-8单元习作 | 写作思路+好词好句+范文
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">第1</span>单元习作《猜猜他是谁》</strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">写话<span style="color: black;">需求</span>：</strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">（1）每段开头空两格；标点符号占一格；不认识的字<span style="color: black;">能够</span>用拼音代替等。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">（2）<span style="color: black;">明显</span><span style="color: black;">名人</span>特点</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">（a）说相貌上与众<span style="color: black;">区别</span>的<span style="color: black;">地区</span>，并按<span style="color: black;">必定</span>的<span style="color: black;">次序</span>。抓住性格、语言、<span style="color: black;">行径</span>及<span style="color: black;">兴趣</span>的<span style="color: black;">明显</span>特点。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">（c）讲清楚相应的<span style="color: black;">详细</span>事例。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">好词：</strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">黑油油的头发、长长的睫毛、亮晶晶、水灵灵的眼睛、虎头虎脑、眉清目秀、浓眉大眼、破涕为笑、捧腹大笑、愁眉苦脸、没精打采、泪流满面</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">好句：</strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">1.她的脸上有一双带着稚气的、被长长的睫毛装饰起来的<span style="color: black;">漂亮</span>的眼睛， 就像两颗水晶葡萄。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">2.这<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>黑虎头似的脸上，生着一对铜铃<span style="color: black;">通常</span>的大眼睛， <span style="color: black;">非常</span>精神。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">3.他的眉毛时而紧紧地皱起，眉宇间形成一个问号；时而愉快地舒展，像个感叹号。</p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">范文：猜猜他是谁</strong></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">他，中等个子，身材结实。圆圆的脑袋上长着乌黑发亮的头发，脸蛋胖嘟嘟、红扑扑的，像个成热的苹果浓浓的眉毛上长着一双清澈透明的大眼睛，帅气极里他，经常穿T恤、牛仔裤和运动鞋，可精神里！</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">他是一个活泼好动的小男孩。每当下课时，他总是<span style="color: black;">第1</span>个冲出教室，飞向操场，和<span style="color: black;">朋友</span>们追逐嬉戏，东奔西跑，玩的满头大汗。每当上课时，他总是最后一个走进教室；趁老师不饿的时候还悄悄地跟<span style="color: black;">朋友</span>说：“下节课<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>继续玩。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">他胆子大，好冲动。高年级大哥哥找他麻烦，他一点<span style="color: black;">亦</span>不畏惧，有时<span style="color: black;">她们</span>打得不可开交，有时跟大哥哥们吵得面红耳赤，挨过老师不少批评。还理直气壮的说：“是<span style="color: black;">她们</span>先挑鲜我的！”你看，今天他又冲动里，又被叫到老师办公室挨训了。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">他经常乐于助人。有一次，高昊吐得满地都是，<span style="color: black;">朋友</span>们纷纷捂着鼻子躲开了，<span style="color: black;">仅有</span>他从食堂拿来煤灰，倒在地上，心的踩了几下，<span style="color: black;">而后</span>弯着腰，拿起扫把仔细的扫了起来，老师竖起大拇指，连连<span style="color: black;">叫作</span>赞他，<span style="color: black;">朋友</span>们<span style="color: black;">亦</span>把赞扬的目光投向他，他开心的笑了。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">你猜出他是谁了吗？他<span style="color: black;">便是</span><span style="color: black;">咱们</span>班上的小明<span style="color: black;">朋友</span>。</p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">第二单元U习作 写日记</strong></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">写作思路：</strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">审阅题目：<span style="color: black;">这次</span>习作<span style="color: black;">便是</span>写日记。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">1.日记的格式有一个特点：<span style="color: black;">第1</span>行要写明日记的日期和天气。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">2.选定内容：<span style="color: black;">详细</span>写什么事。事情<span style="color: black;">出现</span>在什么时间，是在哪里<span style="color: black;">出现</span>的。事情的<span style="color: black;">结果</span>是<span style="color: black;">怎么样</span>的。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">3.表达方式：叙述、描写。表现手法：<span style="color: black;">根据</span>事情发展的<span style="color: black;">次序</span>。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">4.结构<span style="color: black;">次序</span>：先交代时间、地点，事情的起因。接着写事情发展的过程，最后写事情的结果。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">好词：</strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">头重脚轻、指手画脚、鸟语花香、春暖花开、嚷、吼、嚎、啼、俯瞰、远望、叮叮咚咚、哗哗啦啦、鸡飞蛋打、鸡毛蒜皮、初生牛犊不怕虎、九牛二虎之力</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">好句：</strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">1.我立刻兴奋起来，不管三七二十一，甩掉鞋子，从妈妈手中抢过救生圈，光着小脚丫，欢呼着扑向大海的怀抱中。 </p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">2.“扑通！”“扑通！”。<span style="color: black;">大众</span>“奋<span style="color: black;">不顾及</span>身”地一头扎进清亮的小河中，有的手脚并用在水中扑腾，有的仰肚朝天在水面漂浮，有的则像泥鳅<span style="color: black;">同样</span>潜入水底。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">3.刚才还是静静的小河，<span style="color: black;">忽然</span>间喧哗起来：喊叫声、笑闹声此起彼伏，撩水，击水，水花飞溅，你逃，我追，乱成一团。 </p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">范文：2018年7月9日 晴</strong></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">今天，我<span style="color: black;">最终</span>学会了骑<span style="color: black;">自动</span>车，那可<span style="color: black;">不易</span>哦！</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">那天，我坐上座位<span style="color: black;">起始</span>骑车了，可是<span style="color: black;">自动</span>车龙头总是左摇右晃的，一点儿都不听我的使唤。没办法，爸爸只好帮我按住了车龙头，这才稳定<span style="color: black;">有些</span>。就<span style="color: black;">这般</span>，练了好久后，我<span style="color: black;">掌控</span>车龙头的<span style="color: black;">状况</span>才有所好转。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">于是，爸爸放掉了双手，只扶住了车尾。我歪歪扭扭地向前骑着，慢慢地，越骑越顺了，为此，心中不禁暗暗得意。忽然，爸爸说：“你自己会骑了，我<span style="color: black;">已然</span>把手放掉了，你不是<span style="color: black;">亦</span>骑得挺好吗?”我一听，心中一紧张，“啪”地一声连人带车，重重地摔了下来。紧接着，膝盖上传来一阵<span style="color: black;">病痛</span>，我一看，膝盖摔破了，鲜血流了下来。我痛得哇哇大哭，边哭边说：“<span style="color: black;">自动</span>车这么难学，我不学了。”</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">此时</span>，妈妈走了过来，<span style="color: black;">寓意</span>深长地说：“<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>，凡事都不是一帆风顺的，要<span style="color: black;">保持</span>下去，<span style="color: black;">不可</span>半途而废啊！”听了妈妈的话，我若有所思：对呀，蜘蛛在风中织网的画面在眼前浮现，要持之以恒。于是，我ca干了眼泪，擦去了鲜血，又站了起来，扶起了<span style="color: black;">自动</span>车继续练习，继续摔，继续练……</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">后来，我总算学会了骑<span style="color: black;">自动</span>车。<span style="color: black;">经过</span>这件事，我明白了做任何事都要持之以恒，<span style="color: black;">不可</span>半途而废。</p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">第三单元 习作 编童话</strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">写作思路：</strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">（1）故事里有<span style="color: black;">那些</span>角色。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">（2）事情<span style="color: black;">出现</span>在什么时间，是在哪里<span style="color: black;">出现</span>的。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">（3）<span style="color: black;">她们</span>在那里做什么，<span style="color: black;">她们</span>之间<span style="color: black;">出现</span>了什么故事。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">1.表达方式：叙述、描写。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">2.表现手法：开门见山，首尾呼应。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">3.结构<span style="color: black;">次序</span>：先交代时间、事情的起因。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">好词</strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">危急、敌昂、忧郁、恐惧、骄傲 、话说、 惊异、浮想联翩 、兴致勃勃、提心吊胆、刻不容缓、贪婪狡猾、乐不可支、迫在眉睫 、洋洋得意、心潮起伏、故技重演、老气横秋、<span style="color: black;">将来</span>世界、装模作样、灵机一动、眉飞色舞</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">好句</strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">1.从废墟中走出了一个小小的身影，她脸上写着坚定，寻找着<span style="color: black;">期盼</span>。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">2.夜晚在月光的<span style="color: black;">陪同</span>下她走进了银色的森林，她<span style="color: black;">发掘</span>森林的深处已被血染<span style="color: black;">成为了</span><span style="color: black;">漂亮</span>的暗红，在月光下跳跃着。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">3.没<span style="color: black;">太多</span>久，小草的叶子变黄了，身子<span style="color: black;">亦</span>变得瘦弱了，小松树在旁边急得向它招手说：“小草，小草，快快绿起来吧!”</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">4.鲜花们向猫展示着<span style="color: black;">漂亮</span>，猫却对着蝴蝶说：“我爱你。”</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">5.在<span style="color: black;">漂亮</span>的动物世界里，却有狮子王这个昏庸无能的皇帝。但他手下的狼大臣<span style="color: black;">亦</span>不是个好东西，他用花言巧语迷惑皇帝，使皇帝从来<span style="color: black;">不睬</span>朝政。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">6.梦中我化作一条淙淙的小河，流过髙山，流过深谷，<span style="color: black;">最后</span>和我的小伙伴们一同汇入一条地下河流中。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">7.可贵为万兽之王的虎爷的日子却一天比一天窘迫起来，眼看着臣民们生活得竟然比自己还有滋有味，虎爷往日的傲气早就丢到了九霄云外。</p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">范文：眉毛、眼睛、鼻子和嘴巴</strong></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">眉毛、眼睛、鼻子和嘴巴都<span style="color: black;">特别有</span>灵气。平时呀，<span style="color: black;">她们</span>相处得很好。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">可是有一天，站在最底下的嘴巴不服气地发话了，他冲着鼻子就嚷：“鼻子，你有什么能耐站在我的上面去了？”</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">鼻子说：“我能辨别味道啊，<span style="color: black;">而后</span>你才<span style="color: black;">晓得</span>可不<span style="color: black;">能够</span>吃啊。<span style="color: black;">因此</span>，就站在你的上面了哪。”</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">鼻子又冲着眼睛嚷道：“眼睛，你有什么了不起的？凭什么站在我的上面去了？”</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">眼睛说：“我站得高，能了望四方，看到哪里有<span style="color: black;">食品</span>好不让嘴空着；看到哪里有鲜花，好让你闻到香味啊！<span style="color: black;">因此</span>就应该站在你的上面。”</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">鼻子还是不服气，又冲着眉毛大声嚷道：“眉毛，你有什么本领？凭什么你站得最高？”</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">眉毛说：“我<span style="color: black;">亦</span>不<span style="color: black;">晓得</span>我有什么本领，站在各位的上面了，<span style="color: black;">不外</span>呀，你要是把我放在鼻子和嘴巴的下面那就热闹了。那将把<span style="color: black;">全部</span>脸摆在什么位置呢？难道<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>都不要脸了吗？”</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">听眉毛这么一说，鼻子、嘴巴和眼睛<span style="color: black;">好似</span>明白了什么，再<span style="color: black;">亦</span>没话可说了。</p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">第四单元 习作 续写故事</strong></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">写作思路：</strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">审阅题目：看课本插图的内容，<span style="color: black;">咱们</span><span style="color: black;">能够</span>将<span style="color: black;">这次</span>习作的题目定为“过生日”。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">选定内容：</strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">（1）写<span style="color: black;">朋友</span>们课间讨论自己的生日<span style="color: black;">怎么样</span>过。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">（2）写李晓明为自己的生日发愁。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">（3）写<span style="color: black;">朋友</span>们打算为李晓明过生日。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">（4）<span style="color: black;">朋友</span>们为李晓明举行了一场别开生面的生日会，李晓明感动得哭了。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">结构<span style="color: black;">次序</span>：</strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">先写<span style="color: black;">朋友</span>们课间讨论自己的生日<span style="color: black;">怎么样</span>过，接着写李晓明伤心的<span style="color: black;">原由</span>，<span style="color: black;">而后</span>写<span style="color: black;">朋友</span>们打算为李晓明过生日。最后<span style="color: black;">朋友</span>们为李晓明举行了一场别开生面的生日会，李晓明感动得哭了。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">好词：</strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">羞涩、欢天喜地、眼睁睁、心花怒放、活泼开朗、聪明伶俐、乖巧可爱、心乱如麻，喜上眉梢</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">好句：</strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">1.别忘了今天是我的生日，我的爷爷特地给我准备了大蛋糕呢!大蛋糕上镶嵌着各色各样的<span style="color: black;">果蔬</span>，有晶莹的葡萄，绿油油的猕猴桃和红彤彤的樱桃，看到那个蛋糕我就垂涎欲滴。妈妈把蜡烛点燃了，面对着燃烧的蜡烛，我默默地许了个愿望，吹灭了蜡烛，<span style="color: black;">而后</span>和<span style="color: black;">大众</span><span style="color: black;">一块</span>分享起美味的蛋糕。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">2.<span style="color: black;">此时</span>候，<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>点的菜上桌了有：酱牛肉、蒸菜炒鸡蛋··· ···<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>还喝了皮蛋瘦肉粥。<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>三个吃的都<span style="color: black;">尤其</span>饱，<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>玩的很开心。我<span style="color: black;">期盼</span><span style="color: black;">每日</span>都过生日。</p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">范文：过生日</strong></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">甜甜的生日下周三<span style="color: black;">便是</span>李晓明的生日了，可是，爸爸妈妈打<span style="color: black;">tel</span>给他说，<span style="color: black;">近期</span>工作太忙<span style="color: black;">不可</span>回来陪他过生日了。“哎！我什么时候<span style="color: black;">才可</span>像<span style="color: black;">朋友</span>们那样和爸爸妈妈<span style="color: black;">一块</span>过生日呢?”他在内心期盼着。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">转眼到了周三，早上李晓明背着书包闷闷不乐地向学校走去，不一会儿就到了教室门口。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">咦？教室门怎么还关着呀？难道<span style="color: black;">大众</span>都还没来?他一边想一边准备去推教室门。<span style="color: black;">忽然</span>，教室门打开了。“李晓明，生日<span style="color: black;">愉快</span>！”这突如其来的一声把他吓了一跳。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">看到他大惊失色的样子，<span style="color: black;">朋友</span>们都乐得哈哈大笑了起来。<span style="color: black;">此时</span>，班长捧着一个小巧玲珑的蛋糕，<span style="color: black;">步行到</span>李晓明面前笑着说：“晓明，生日<span style="color: black;">愉快</span>！这是我和同学们<span style="color: black;">一块</span>用自己的零花钱为你买的生日蛋糕，<span style="color: black;">表率</span>着全班<span style="color: black;">朋友</span>对你的美好祝福。”<span style="color: black;">朋友</span>们<span style="color: black;">亦</span>不约而同地为李晓明唱起了生日歌。李晓明接过蛋糕，听着悦耳的生日歌，高兴得不<span style="color: black;">晓得</span>说什么好。“</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">晓明，虽然这次生日你的爸爸妈妈<span style="color: black;">不可</span>陪你过，可是有<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>在，<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>会陪着你的。”班长又认真地说道。李晓明感动极了，他重重地点了点头。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">李晓明开心地吃完了这个甜甜的蛋糕，感觉那丝丝甜味都流进了心里。</p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">第五单元 习作 <span style="color: black;">咱们</span>眼中的缤纷世界</strong></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">写作思路：（植物）</strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">1.审阅题目：<span style="color: black;">这次</span>习作的范围是“<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>眼中的缤纷世界”，缤纷的世界<span style="color: black;">能够</span>是写一种植物，<span style="color: black;">亦</span><span style="color: black;">能够</span>写一个动物。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">2.选定内容：</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">(1)描写一种植物。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">(2)抓住颜色和形状进行描写。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">(3)描写植物的生活习性。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">3.结构<span style="color: black;">次序</span>：先直接点题，告诉读者我最<span style="color: black;">爱好</span>的是什么植物，并用对比的手法<span style="color: black;">明显</span>特点；接着写植物的样子；<span style="color: black;">而后</span>写植物的生活习性在结尾赞美，与开头相呼应。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">好词</strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">芳草、杂草、野草、密叶、新绿、翠绿、怒放、芳香、清香、幽香、低垂、摇摆、摇曳、飘舞、亭亭玉立、姹紫嫣红、 鲜花怒放、五彩缤纷、万紫千红、枝繁叶茂 、舒枝展叶、清秀挺拔、盘根错节、葱绿苍翠、绿树成荫、枝叶如盖</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">好句</strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">1.小青松的根盘根错节，一部分深入泥土，一部分露在上面，像一件人工雕砌的艺术品。它的枝条千姿百态，有的挺拔直立，像一位倔强的小男孩；有的曲折蜿蜒，像一位腼腆的小姑娘；有的枝条已脱皮，那就更像一位老态龙钟的老人了。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">2.金绣球的花是黄色的，花瓣紧紧地抱在<span style="color: black;">一块</span>，好似一张张<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>的笑脸，用好奇的大眼睛四处张望，有的还是一个小花蕊，正躲在绿色的大伞下面乘凉，又<span style="color: black;">好似</span>是害羞的小姑娘，不敢露出那圆圆的小脑袋。至于它的香气<span style="color: black;">吗</span>，清醇浓郁，那一团团的香气，真让人心醉。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">3.梅花集超凡脱俗的花态、坚韧不拔的品格、无私奉献的精神于一身。我<span style="color: black;">爱好</span>梅花！</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">4.柳树是有着顽强生命力的。这仅从众人皆知的一句“无心插柳柳成荫”便能知晓。不仅如此，柳树在骨子里<span style="color: black;">亦</span>是非常坚强的，虽然它外表柔弱。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">5.两片绿油油的“大桑叶”亭亭玉立，像是两个<span style="color: black;">漂亮</span>的姑娘笔直的站在那里，为娇小的椭圆形叶子遮太阳呢！每当浇完水的时候，水珠就落在了叶子上，就像珍珠落在玉盘里，真是美<span style="color: black;">不堪</span>收。</p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">范文：仙人掌</strong></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">我家养了许多花，它们争奇斗艳，可是我最<span style="color: black;">爱好</span>的是仙人掌，虽然它<span style="color: black;">无</span>玫瑰的艳丽，<span style="color: black;">无</span>牡丹的娇贵，<span style="color: black;">亦</span><span style="color: black;">无</span>九里香的香味，它总是默默无闻地站在那里，不会去引人注目，但我<span style="color: black;">爱好</span>它的顽强。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">仙人掌的颜色是墨绿色的，绿得健康，绿得倔强。一眼望去仙人掌像一个个绿色的手掌。它的叶子<span style="color: black;">便是</span>那一根根刺，你可别小瞧那一根根小刺，重<span style="color: black;">能够</span>不浇水，<span style="color: black;">况且</span>在沙漠地带有<span style="color: black;">尤其</span>多仙人掌，。听说它那一根根刺；<span style="color: black;">能够</span>给它留住水分和养分，让它更加滋润。只需一点点水，它就<span style="color: black;">能够</span>顽强地生活。<span style="color: black;">因此</span>我非常<span style="color: black;">爱好</span>仙人掌的坚强。虽然它外表<span style="color: black;">欠好</span>看；<span style="color: black;">况且</span>看上去有点可怕，但它身上有许多东西值得我学习。仙人掌<span style="color: black;">能够</span>药用，<span style="color: black;">亦</span><span style="color: black;">能够</span>食用，<span style="color: black;">拥有</span>清热解毒，消肿止痛，健脾止泻，安神利尿等功效。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">仙人掌对人无所求，但有顽强的生命力，就像保卫国家的解放军叔叔，<span style="color: black;">她们</span>在严寒的风雪中站岗；在烈日炎炎的夏天放哨。不正是仙人掌顽强的精神的<span style="color: black;">表现</span>吗？</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">我爱那墨绿色的<span style="color: black;">拥有</span>顽强生命力的仙人掌！</p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">第六单元 习作 这儿真美</strong></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">写作思路</strong>：</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">1.审阅题目：<span style="color: black;">咱们</span><span style="color: black;">周边</span>有许多<span style="color: black;">漂亮</span>的景物，如花香四溢的花园、硕果累累的果园，辽阔无垠的田野，波光粼粼的小河……让<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>心驰神往，让<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>流连忘返。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">请<span style="color: black;">朋友</span>们从这些美景中 <span style="color: black;">选取</span>一处介绍给<span style="color: black;">大众</span>吧！</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">2.选定内容。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">3.表现手法：</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">(1)抓住特点，大胆想象，景中有物，物有生情；</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">(2)运用比喻、排比、拟人等多种表现手法。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">(3)采取首尾呼应的手法。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">好词：</strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">破晓、日出东方、日出金光、东方鱼肚白、骄阳似火、晨曦初露、天色微明、晨雾蒙蒙、晨星寥落、旭日东升、夕阳西下、落日残阳、月光皎洁、银盘挂中天、冷月清辉、</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">好句</strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">1.天刚破晓，淡青色的天空还镶着几颗稀落的残星。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">2.清晨，含苞欲放的蓓蕾上，晶莹明亮的露珠闪烁着，<span style="color: black;">显出</span>生气勃勃。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">3.<span style="color: black;">傍晚</span><span style="color: black;">已然</span>谢去，夜幕早已铺开。高高的法国梧桐，被刺眼的白色路灯照亮。在黑色的夜空里镶了一圈又一圈墨绿，有时被拂过的夜风飘动，发出轻轻的沙沙声，只<span style="color: black;">那样</span>一阵，就消失在无限的<span style="color: black;">清闲</span>之中。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">4.不知什么时候，绚烂的朝霞染红了半边天，又将柔和的色彩洒在校园里。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">5.清晨，东方<span style="color: black;">显现</span>了瑰丽的朝霞，村子里的屋顶上飘着缕缕炊烟，空气中弥漫着轻纱似的薄雾。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">6.<span style="color: black;">此时</span>，正是夕阳西下的时分，草原上<span style="color: black;">包围</span>起金色的寂静，远处山峦披上晚霞的彩衣，那天边牛乳般洁白的云朵，<span style="color: black;">亦</span>变得火带<span style="color: black;">通常</span>鲜红。草浪平息了，牧归的牛羊群从远方草原走来；<span style="color: black;">仅有</span><span style="color: black;">哪些</span>夜间<span style="color: black;">亦</span>不返回的骆驼群，还在那柳林<span style="color: black;">周边</span>的湖边上游荡着。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">7.啊，校园的清晨！<span style="color: black;">这儿</span>是一天的<span style="color: black;">起始</span>，<span style="color: black;">这儿</span>是人生的起步；理想的种子要播种，人生的<span style="color: black;">道理</span>要认识。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">8.天阴了，夜幕将天空压低，显现出深沉而浓烈的幻象，一轮圆月像是罩在子夜上的洁白面纱，光晕一片。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">9.家乡的天空是碧蓝碧蓝的，像<span style="color: black;">一起</span>蓝宝石，又像一片海。虽然那时的我从未看过海，但我想，海<span style="color: black;">亦</span>该像我家乡的天空<span style="color: black;">同样</span>。你看，那淡淡的云朵不是很像海边的浪花吗?那在天空中<span style="color: black;">遨游</span>的飞鸟不正是在海中遨游的鱼儿吗?此刻，我就像那个童话里抬头仰望的海的女儿，望着这碧海蓝天向往着那无限的<span style="color: black;">将来</span>。</p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">这儿真美</strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">春天的校园真美。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">春姑娘来了，她带着生命与<span style="color: black;">期盼</span>悄悄走进校园，校园顿时充满了生机与喜悦。瞧，草地上<span style="color: black;">哪些</span>可爱的小草悄悄的织起了<span style="color: black;">一起</span>绿色的毯子。迎春花<span style="color: black;">亦</span>禁不住春天的<span style="color: black;">引诱</span>，打开一扇扇金黄的窗户，吸收<span style="color: black;">鲜嫩</span>空气，感受春天的温暖。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">桃花<span style="color: black;">亦</span>含苞欲放，<span style="color: black;">好似</span>马上就要绽开<span style="color: black;">同样</span>。但有一些桃花<span style="color: black;">已然</span>开满了枝头，远远望去，<span style="color: black;">好似</span>一朵朵红色的云<span style="color: black;">同样</span>。柳树悄悄的抽出嫩绿的枝条，春风一吹，柳树的头发就像跳起了摇摆舞。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">校园的荷花塘更美了，河面上的一层薄冰融化了，河水唱起了欢快的歌，鱼儿<span style="color: black;">亦</span>在水里游了起来，一群群可爱的小鸭在水里嬉戏，一会儿钻到水下捉鱼，一会儿又露出头，引吭高歌。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">春天的校园真美呀！因为万事万物都充满了生机。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">漂亮</span>的日出</strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"> 暑假的一天，妈妈带我去海边看日出。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">天还没亮，<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>就来到了海边。海面<span style="color: black;">非常</span>平静，<span style="color: black;">无</span>一点声音，就像<span style="color: black;">一起</span>巨大的蓝宝石静静地躺在那里，隐约泛着淡淡的光。<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>等了很<span style="color: black;">长期</span>海的尽头<span style="color: black;">忽然</span><span style="color: black;">显现</span>了一丝光亮。“<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>马上就能看到<span style="color: black;">漂亮</span>的日出了。”妈妈指着发光的<span style="color: black;">地区</span>轻声提醒我。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">时间一分一秒地过去了，太阳<span style="color: black;">最终</span>探出了一丁点儿脑袋。没<span style="color: black;">太多</span>久，它渐渐地亮了起来。天空<span style="color: black;">亦</span>慢慢变<span style="color: black;">成为了</span>淡粉色，接着又变<span style="color: black;">成为了</span>红色。“啊，太阳就要出来啦！”我激动地叫了起来。<span style="color: black;">此时</span>，天边的云彩像被太阳烧着了似的，火红一片，但并不刺眼。海面<span style="color: black;">亦</span>被映<span style="color: black;">成为了</span>红色，一时间，水天相接，真是分不清哪里是天，哪里是海了。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">火速</span>，太阳露出了大半个身子，红形形的、金灿灿的，看起来满怀喜悦与热情。我目不转睛地看着东方的天空.<span style="color: black;">忽然</span>，太阳像个调皮的<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>，纵身一跃，圆乎乎的身子如同一个金球一下子%了出来。它身边的朝酸<span style="color: black;">亦</span>在<span style="color: black;">持续</span>地扩大范围，<span style="color: black;">持续</span>地换着衣服：红的、黄的、紫的……<span style="color: black;">全部</span>天空变得绚丽多彩。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">旭日东升，新的一天就要<span style="color: black;">起始</span>了。</p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">第七单元 习作 我有一个想法</strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">写作思路：</strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">1.审阅题目：本题<span style="color: black;">需求</span><span style="color: black;">咱们</span>写关于生活中的想法。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">2.选定内容：自己生活中遇到过什么问题，这些问题<span style="color: black;">是不是</span>需要改进呢？把你的想法写出来，提出<span style="color: black;">恰当</span>化的改进<span style="color: black;">意见</span>。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">3.表现手法：首尾呼应，开篇点题。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">4.结构<span style="color: black;">次序</span>：在写作文时，<span style="color: black;">首要</span>提出问题，把你的想法写清楚，<span style="color: black;">而后</span>写对这种想法的改进办法或<span style="color: black;">意见</span>。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">好词：</strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">猜谜、滑稽、打趣、动听、悦耳、高亢、浑厚、悠扬、鼓掌、动人、伯乐识马、不耻下问、 出尔反尔、出奇制胜 美<span style="color: black;">不堪</span>收、精彩纷呈、扣人心弦、叹为观止、脱口而出、评头论足、毕恭毕敬、高潮迭起、难解难分、稳操胜券、胸有成竹、渐入佳境、屡屡夺冠、</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">好句：</strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">1.饿着肚子走了大半夜的摸黑山路，实在是累饿交加，浑身无力。听到<span style="color: black;">休憩</span>的号令一下，<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>便把箩筐放在窄窄的山路上，<span style="color: black;">而后</span>把扁担横放箩筐上，管它三七二十一，翻天便倒在扁担上，酣然睡去。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">2.在我和老爸的精心合作下，老妈的生日过得开心极了。正可谓“起坐而喧哗者，一家欢<span style="color: black;">亦</span>；喜上眉梢怡然其间者，老妈笑<span style="color: black;">亦</span>!"</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">3.爸爸唱完《<span style="color: black;">尤其</span>的爱给<span style="color: black;">尤其</span>的你》以后，腰弯得像大虾似的连连鞠躬，还模仿着港台歌星的派头，来了个飞吻，逗得<span style="color: black;">咱们</span><span style="color: black;">整家</span>都哈哈大笑起来。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">4.紧紧尾随前面的电动摩托，小心翼翼的行完最繁华，最嘈杂的小镇路段，<span style="color: black;">最终</span>来到了时时<span style="color: black;">光临</span>的菜市场路口。或许是此路段还<span style="color: black;">将来</span>得及<span style="color: black;">研发</span>的<span style="color: black;">原由</span><span style="color: black;">导致</span>，遥遥向里延伸的菜市场小径，两旁空旷的田野里，稀稀疏疏滋生出的寥寥荒草在夕阳的余辉里，随着微风，轻轻摇曳着轻柔婀娜的舞姿，静静沐浴在夕阳挥洒的光晕里，独享这一份难得的惬意和静谧。每每遇上<span style="color: black;">这般</span>好的天气、遇上<span style="color: black;">这般</span>好的时景，我都会<span style="color: black;">这里</span>驻足，让自己融入其中，良久、良久....</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">5.就<span style="color: black;">这般</span>走在曾走过的<span style="color: black;">地区</span>，不变的季节，不变的风景，<span style="color: black;">独一</span>变化的是走路者的心情；<span style="color: black;">一样</span>的路线，<span style="color: black;">一样</span>的<span style="color: black;">暗号</span>，<span style="color: black;">区别</span>的是路面更加坚固，路线更加坚定。站在山顶上，闭上眼睛，张开双臂。</p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">范文：我有一个想法</strong></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">想法，是多种多样的。有的人，他的想法很宏伟；有的人，他的想法很美好；有的人，他的想法很温暖。我<span style="color: black;">亦</span>有一个想法，我的想法很微小，但充满温馨。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">快过年了，家中准备买几样新的摆饰。妈妈是个爱听音乐的人，听到音乐，她有时会静静地听完这首音乐再走，有时会<span style="color: black;">显出</span>很兴奋，时不时还会哼唱几句。我<span style="color: black;">忽然</span>就有了一个想法：给妈妈买一个八音盒吧！八音盒中的旋律，妈妈<span style="color: black;">必定</span>会<span style="color: black;">爱好</span>的。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">在去买八音盒的路上，天下着小雨，雨落在屋檐上，“嘀，嗒”清脆而明快，像一首美妙的歌。我加快了脚步，来到店里，我精心挑选，选中了一个淡紫色，外观是旋转木马的八音盒，轻轻一拨，旋转木马自动转起来，放出了著名钢琴曲《献给爱丽丝》。优雅浪漫的紫色配着唯美的曲调，令人心旷神怡。我小心地捧起八音盒，像捧着一个婴儿，匆匆付了钱，走向回家的路上。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">步行到</span>家，妈妈还没回来，我将旋转八音盒擦了一遍又一遍，等待妈妈回来时惊喜。等了好久，楼道里传来了<span style="color: black;">熟练</span>的脚步声，妈妈回来了！我赶紧跑到书房里，想着妈妈惊喜的样子，我满意地笑了，我的想法实现了。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">从此，八音盒转动时，放出的不仅是那美妙的旋律，还有那浓浓的亲情。</p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">第八单元 习作 那次玩得真高兴</strong></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">写作思路：</strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">1.审阅题目：<span style="color: black;">这次</span>习作<span style="color: black;">需求</span><span style="color: black;">咱们</span>把玩得最开心、印象最深刻的一次活动写下来。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">2.选定内容：确定好习作内容，是写<span style="color: black;">帮忙</span>别人，还是写<span style="color: black;">一块</span>玩滑梯，还是写一次郊游……</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">能够</span>开门见山式的交代童年开心的事，<span style="color: black;">而后</span><span style="color: black;">详细</span>写事情<span style="color: black;">出现</span>的始末，最后点题。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">开头结尾举例：</strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">开头：童年如同一场五彩斑斓的梦，在<span style="color: black;">每一个</span>人的童年中，<span style="color: black;">必定</span>会<span style="color: black;">出现</span><span style="color: black;">不可胜数</span>开心的事，我<span style="color: black;">亦</span>不例外。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">结尾：这件事虽然过去了很久，但它就像是<span style="color: black;">出现</span>在昨天<span style="color: black;">同样</span>历历在目。这<span style="color: black;">便是</span>我玩得最开心的事。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">好词：</strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">牙牙学语、东跑西颠、爱不释手、忍俊不禁、呆头呆脑、愣头愣脑、你追我赶、抱头鼠窜、逃之夭夭、穷追猛打、乱作一团、鸡飞狗跳、自以为是、屏声息气、尖声尖气、指手画脚、油腔滑调、撒娇卖乖、装聋作哑、装腔作势、装模装样、若无其事、调皮捣蛋、满身泥浆、</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">好句好段：</strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">1.童年是美好的，而它，却<span style="color: black;">仅有</span>一次。在布满乐趣的童年了，我做了许<span style="color: black;">非常多</span>多的趣事，有一件事，我是永远<span style="color: black;">亦</span>忘不了的。 </p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">2.夏日的<span style="color: black;">傍晚</span>，我经常和李玉、冬瓜、肥仔<span style="color: black;">一块</span>去幽灵谷捉蜻蜓、蚱蜢、毛毛虫什么的，偶尔<span style="color: black;">亦</span>会翻过矮墙，跑到芬芝妈的菜园里去捣乱。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">3.记得有一回，我与小伙伴把几条鱼好<span style="color: black;">不易</span>地赶到石缝里。我屏住气，轻轻地把手伸向石缝里的小鱼，小鱼的嘴一张一合，<span style="color: black;">好似</span>在说：“求求你，放了我吧！”我见这条小鱼可怜的样子，便放了它，又去捉大的。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">4.<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>却趁机在人堆里捣蛋，搞小动作。有时索性从<span style="color: black;">成人</span>的裤裆下钻过来，若<span style="color: black;">成人</span>一收腿，就该倒霉了。那样子的确令人好笑，脑壳子被卡住了，进退两难，摆手摆腿，比翻倒的乌龟还狼狈。 </p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">5.回首童年，众多记忆浮<span style="color: black;">此刻</span>眼前。那一幕幕情景，虽表面可笑，却富有<span style="color: black;">道理</span>；那一个个<span style="color: black;">新鲜</span>的<span style="color: black;">名人</span>，和我<span style="color: black;">一块</span>见证着历史的足迹。我仿佛看到了记忆大树上挂着的叶子记录着我的过去，在风中摇曳着，晃动着……</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">6.盛夏时节，蝈蝈儿的叫声逗引着<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>们。我和小<span style="color: black;">伴侣</span>们便提着<span style="color: black;">刚才</span>扎好的蝈蝈笼，欣然前往了。<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>来到了南大沟，沟里的水早已干了，沟壁上长着茂密的草，<span style="color: black;">这儿</span>是蝈蝈的王国。黑色的蝈蝈是国王，还有绿色的豆蝈蝈、草蝈蝈……<span style="color: black;">因为</span>这个<span style="color: black;">原由</span>，<span style="color: black;">这儿</span><span style="color: black;">亦</span>就<span style="color: black;">成为了</span><span style="color: black;">咱们</span>的“殖民地”、<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>的“世界”了。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">7.好<span style="color: black;">不易</span>才挨到鸡啼破晓时分，匆匆换上新衣新鞋新袜子，便兴致勃勃地向老一辈讨红包，那该是孩童时代最<span style="color: black;">欢快</span>的时刻了。</p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">范文：<span style="color: black;">愉快</span>的一天</strong></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">星期六上午，妈妈带我和扬扬去“儿童世界”玩，这可是<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>梦寐以求的<span style="color: black;">地区</span>。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">一到门口，<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>兴奋得跳了起来。啊！<span style="color: black;">这儿</span>有金黄柔软的沙滩，有晶莹透明的水床，还有惊险刺激的飞车……妈妈买了票，我俩便迫不及待地冲了进去，在里面翻哪，滚哪，痛痛快快地玩了起来。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">最刺激的要数飞车了。我一爬上去，就觉得<span style="color: black;">尤其</span>紧张，吓得大气都不敢出。飞车<span style="color: black;">起始</span>运行了，它快速地转来转去，我紧张得闭上了眼睛。不一会儿，我感到身子一轻，我眯眼一看，原来它把<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>倒过来了，真是太可怕了。<span style="color: black;">倘若</span>掉下去，有可能会粉身碎骨哇！一想到这，我</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">吓得全身发抖，连忙叫了起来：“快停……”话还没说完，飞车又转了起来。这真是太刺激啦！</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">咱们</span>还玩了旋转木马。骑上木马的扬扬高声喊着：“我是一个<span style="color: black;">愉快</span>的牧马人，鸣呼……”我回头一看，只见他，身子向下斜着。<span style="color: black;">忽然</span>，他手一滑掉了下去，摔了个四脚朝天。看着他那滑稽的样子，我笑得眼泪都流下来了。</p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">回家的时间到了，<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>只好依依不舍地离开了“儿童世界”。这真是<span style="color: black;">愉快</span>的一天！</p>
在遇到你之前，我对人世间是否有真正的圣人是怀疑的。 你的见解真是独到，让我受益良多。
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