esc0rp 发表于 2024-9-28 15:03:49

假如让AI来批改英语作文……


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    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">｜科技引领新经济｜</span></p>
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    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">看过有道AI老师来批改作文，你可能觉得英语作文训练其实<span style="color: black;">亦</span>没<span style="color: black;">那样</span>难了。</span></p>
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    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">钛<span style="color: black;">媒介</span>编辑丨李程程&nbsp;</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">在英语学习“听说读写”四个环节中，中国学习者<span style="color: black;">常常</span><span style="color: black;">善于</span>“听”和“读”， “说”和“写”却是典型的薄弱环节。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">针对</span><span style="color: black;">提高</span>“说”的能力，<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>有<span style="color: black;">非常多</span><span style="color: black;">选取</span>，无论是<span style="color: black;">白话</span>学习的APP，还是真人授课服务，供给端竞争非常激烈。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">但<span style="color: black;">针对</span>写作的环节，<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>却很少有机会得到训练。书面交流不仅更要比<span style="color: black;">白话</span>更遵守语法规则，还对一个人的词句篇章、构思<span style="color: black;">规律</span>等有更高的<span style="color: black;">需求</span>。<span style="color: black;">同期</span>，写作环节的反馈，会耗费<span style="color: black;">更加多</span>的精力和时间。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">为<span style="color: black;">认识</span>决英语学习者在写作上的难点和痛点，网易有道<span style="color: black;">开发</span>并且上线了以人工智能驱动的批改英文作文的功能。<span style="color: black;">据述</span>，这位“AI老师”的专业和细致程度，堪比高考阅卷老师。</span></p>
    <h2 style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">有道 AI 作文批改功能体验</span></strong></span></h2>
    <h2 style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;"><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_png/OaFsUa11r0Bs4ic2ppk8xY4Q3ibHZfZicEKu8ia6x0q3HQKt11jGibCZyKZut1XCVus4Go1zyARv0VK7VOWsrgG7sFQ/640?wx_fmt=png&amp;tp=webp&amp;wxfrom=5&amp;wx_lazy=1&amp;wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></span></strong></span></strong></span></h2>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">有道的AI作文批改功能，<span style="color: black;">已然</span>嵌入在了其旗下最热门的<span style="color: black;">制品</span>“网易有道词典APP”中。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">打开网易有道词典APP，“作文批改”功能<span style="color: black;">已然</span>在首页<span style="color: black;">表示</span>，一目了然。点击之后，<span style="color: black;">咱们</span><span style="color: black;">能够</span><span style="color: black;">选取</span><span style="color: black;">能够</span>批改的类型，范围从K12到大学四六级，以及托福雅思等出国考试，非常全面。</span></p><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_jpg/OaFsUa11r0B5aR5tPohvPg3DwIUvO8xVgFPzTuBG2yc1dof0UicduDVv7KqjxySzvLzDUUOzGQia4KibzCXYWSRWg/640?wx_fmt=jpeg&amp;tp=webp&amp;wxfrom=5&amp;wx_lazy=1&amp;wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;">
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">有道AI作文批改上，有拍照批改模式和手动输入模式两种。鉴于<span style="color: black;">日前</span>大<span style="color: black;">都数</span>考试写作的场景是基于手写，<span style="color: black;">咱们</span><span style="color: black;">选取</span>了主打手写识别的拍照模式。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">为了更沉浸式地感受AI老师，<span style="color: black;">首要</span>，我假装自己是一名高三学生，写（抄）了一篇150词<span style="color: black;">上下</span>词汇的英文作文。作文的大意是，李明向好友詹姆斯（James）写了一封信，解释<span style="color: black;">为何</span><span style="color: black;">不可</span>陪他在暑期休假以及<span style="color: black;">关联</span>事情。</span></p><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_jpg/OaFsUa11r0B5aR5tPohvPg3DwIUvO8xV1icf58FoJjv5L9JS4mrvBQO6fjFwAvb6icJpUbfZFTPt21TtxI1Mo2zQ/640?wx_fmt=jpeg&amp;tp=webp&amp;wxfrom=5&amp;wx_lazy=1&amp;wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;">
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">AI系统将<span style="color: black;">照片</span>识别之后，<span style="color: black;">首要</span>会提示你，点击屏幕<span style="color: black;">能够</span>编辑作文，还会<span style="color: black;">通知</span>你提交前<span style="color: black;">能够</span>再<span style="color: black;">检测</span>一遍。此处估计是担心人工智能<span style="color: black;">针对</span>手写体识别可能会<span style="color: black;">显现</span>的失误。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">这一提醒环节设置<span style="color: black;">非常</span>必要。钛<span style="color: black;">媒介</span>在体验过程中<span style="color: black;">发掘</span>，即便是识别的准确率非常高，但<span style="color: black;">亦</span>会有个别单词，<span style="color: black;">由于</span>字迹潦草而<span style="color: black;">显现</span>失误。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">确认提交之后，有道AI作文批改给这篇小作文打了17分（总分25分），并且，细化到词汇、结构、语法和内容方面均有评级。</span></p><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_jpg/OaFsUa11r0B5aR5tPohvPg3DwIUvO8xVdJibpTh6SMOcGeGkVhyU18gsibgtX4niadpeyplXVL3JhDFO7UibKicWCjQ/640?wx_fmt=jpeg&amp;tp=webp&amp;wxfrom=5&amp;wx_lazy=1&amp;wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;">
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">更为重要的是，在点击每一处标红的<span style="color: black;">地区</span>，有道AI老师都<span style="color: black;">仔细</span>地指出了错误及其<span style="color: black;">原由</span>，还给出<span style="color: black;">意见</span>修正的意见。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">为了让作者的写作水平更进一步，有道AI老师对这篇作文给出了如下严厉不失细致的评语；</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">“<span style="color: black;">文案</span>字数疑似超出该考试字数<span style="color: black;">需求</span>；在高中级别下，有<span style="color: black;">必定</span>词汇<span style="color: black;">累积</span>，能<span style="color: black;">运用</span>少量高级词汇，但还需<span style="color: black;">更加多</span><span style="color: black;">累积</span>；<span style="color: black;">文案</span>语句生硬，需加强上下文联系；单词拼写基本正确，词汇<span style="color: black;">基本</span>扎实；存在较多语法错误。”</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">总的<span style="color: black;">来讲</span>，有道的AI作文批改功能，针对<span style="color: black;">区别</span>学段和<span style="color: black;">区别</span>类别的考试水平进行相对专业的打分，并从词、句、篇章进行点评和<span style="color: black;">举荐</span>，生成<span style="color: black;">仔细</span>的报告。在语法纠正方面，<span style="color: black;">亦</span>给出了清晰的解析，直击中国考试的痛点，非常适合备考的学员在<span style="color: black;">平常</span>的练习。</span></strong></p>
    <h2 style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">有道 AI 作文批改 VS 微软爱写作</span></strong></span></h2>
    <h2 style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;"><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_png/OaFsUa11r0Bs4ic2ppk8xY4Q3ibHZfZicEKu8ia6x0q3HQKt11jGibCZyKZut1XCVus4Go1zyARv0VK7VOWsrgG7sFQ/640?wx_fmt=png&amp;tp=webp&amp;wxfrom=5&amp;wx_lazy=1&amp;wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></span></strong></span></strong></span></h2>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">除了有道之外，<span style="color: black;">日前</span>市面上由人工智能驱动的英文改写的<span style="color: black;">制品</span>，还有巨头微软旗下的微软爱写作（微软小英），和估值<span style="color: black;">已然</span>超过10亿美元的英文在线写作工具“Grammarly”。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">不外</span>，很遗憾的是，<span style="color: black;">日前</span>Grammarly <span style="color: black;">无</span>上线拍照识别手写的功能，因而，为了相对客观的对比，<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>先体验了微软爱写作的<span style="color: black;">制品</span>。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">钛<span style="color: black;">媒介</span><span style="color: black;">发掘</span>，微软爱写作<span style="color: black;">日前</span><span style="color: black;">重点</span>是网页版，还<span style="color: black;">无</span>上线中国区的App Store的<span style="color: black;">关联</span>APP。<span style="color: black;">不外</span>，它<span style="color: black;">已然</span>嵌入了“微软小英”的公众号内。该公众号是微软亚洲<span style="color: black;">科研</span>院打造的一款免费的英语学习公众号，主打AI与英语学习相结合的体验。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">在公众号内，<span style="color: black;">选取</span>“抢先体验”—“<span style="color: black;">发掘</span>工具”—“作文打分”，入口相对隐蔽。并且，公众号在提示用户，更<span style="color: black;">举荐</span><span style="color: black;">大众</span><span style="color: black;">运用</span>web端，<span style="color: black;">无</span>切合当前移动互联网的大趋势。</span></p><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_jpg/OaFsUa11r0B5aR5tPohvPg3DwIUvO8xVZbJm5oH1GraKIPVQ8tjAGeMuMoxY9uhE3YomB09Micic11mIOI7CLHjw/640?wx_fmt=jpeg&amp;tp=webp&amp;wxfrom=5&amp;wx_lazy=1&amp;wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;">
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">一样</span>还是<span style="color: black;">以上</span>手抄作文，微软爱写作识别了之后，给出了23分（<span style="color: black;">不外</span>总分是多少不清楚），以及从词汇句式、<span style="color: black;">文案</span>流畅性、<span style="color: black;">文案</span>内容和拼写语法四个<span style="color: black;">方向</span>给出了<span style="color: black;">评估</span>。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">微软的系统对这篇作文<span style="color: black;">评估</span>还不错。与有道AI老师比起来，微软小英AI老师要温和得多了，<span style="color: black;">马上</span>让人捡起来了刚被击退的英文写作的<span style="color: black;">自信心</span>。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">不外</span>仔细一想，这更像是基于模板的“统一回复”，<span style="color: black;">由于</span>微软爱写作并<span style="color: black;">无</span>指出<span style="color: black;">详细</span>的语法和句法的错误，<span style="color: black;">亦</span><span style="color: black;">无</span>给出今后<span style="color: black;">怎样</span><span style="color: black;">加强</span>的针对性意见。</span></strong></p>
    <h2 style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">有道 AI 作文批改 VS Grammarly</span></strong></span></h2>
    <h2 style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;"><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_png/OaFsUa11r0Bs4ic2ppk8xY4Q3ibHZfZicEKu8ia6x0q3HQKt11jGibCZyKZut1XCVus4Go1zyARv0VK7VOWsrgG7sFQ/640?wx_fmt=png&amp;tp=webp&amp;wxfrom=5&amp;wx_lazy=1&amp;wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></span></strong></span></strong></span></h2>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">体验完微软爱写作，再<span style="color: black;">瞧瞧</span>改写工具Grammarly，毕竟这是一款日活<span style="color: black;">已然</span>超过2000万用户的<span style="color: black;">制品</span>。虽然它<span style="color: black;">不可</span>手写识别，但<span style="color: black;">咱们</span><span style="color: black;">能够</span>从挑选单句，进行语法错误纠正方面的对比。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">例句1：Like students sing English song.</span></strong></p><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_jpg/OaFsUa11r0B5aR5tPohvPg3DwIUvO8xVR4dAU7hoqhtZlMgicEm5ypZwWhwRvM1MyJ0aNrvc7RtjmmBs3iaw0s8g/640?wx_fmt=jpeg&amp;tp=webp&amp;wxfrom=5&amp;wx_lazy=1&amp;wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;">
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">有道词典</span></span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">有道词典：</span></strong></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">疑似动词时态错误，<span style="color: black;">意见</span>将“sing”修正为“singing”；疑似名词单复数错误，<span style="color: black;">意见</span>将“song”修正为“songs”.</p>
    <img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_jpg/OaFsUa11r0B5aR5tPohvPg3DwIUvO8xVVmxMn4D16k3ZeWEQINWHm6g6PO3CTZ1vWKKXvDADt2exnc8QWYQ1pg/640?wx_fmt=jpeg&amp;tp=webp&amp;wxfrom=5&amp;wx_lazy=1&amp;wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;">
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">Grammarly</span></span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">Grammarly（免费版）</span></strong><span style="color: black;">：名词单复数错误，<span style="color: black;">意见</span>将“song”改为“songs”.</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">例句2：When the girl will leave, she fount an old begger in the tree and looked at angry and cold.</span></strong></p><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_jpg/OaFsUa11r0B5aR5tPohvPg3DwIUvO8xV91EwBXSkGG8egMcCfm4eBjGK3WtayO7JP5DjpJ6uBSoshdHiaE4gT7A/640?wx_fmt=jpeg&amp;tp=webp&amp;wxfrom=5&amp;wx_lazy=1&amp;wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;">
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">有道词典</span></span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">有道词典</span></strong><span style="color: black;">：疑似用词<span style="color: black;">欠妥</span>，<span style="color: black;">意见</span>将“will leave”修正为“left”；疑似动词时态错误，<span style="color: black;">意见</span>将“fount”修正为“found”；疑似名词误用，<span style="color: black;">意见</span>将“begger”修正为“beggar”等。</span></p><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_jpg/OaFsUa11r0B5aR5tPohvPg3DwIUvO8xVvmtaExd9osqnXfq4WF5KpsYGaSUc1fhg3GjlzdnR4O3LGQibTsH0C5w/640?wx_fmt=jpeg&amp;tp=webp&amp;wxfrom=5&amp;wx_lazy=1&amp;wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;">
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">Grammarly</span></span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">Grammarly（免费版）</span></strong><span style="color: black;">：<span style="color: black;">意见</span>将“begger”更改为“beggar”.</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">对比小结</span><span style="color: black;">：<span style="color: black;">咱们</span><span style="color: black;">发掘</span>，有道词典更能识别出较<span style="color: black;">繁杂</span>的语法错误，如时态错误（过去式<span style="color: black;">占多数</span>）,动词原形与动名词误用。Grammarly偏向简单的语法修改，如介词误用，名词单复数错误等。</span></strong></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">例句 3：Nest Tuesday, our class is going to a music camp.</span></strong></p><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_jpg/OaFsUa11r0B5aR5tPohvPg3DwIUvO8xVy8GvUTWsFicRkhdKxzMIiaCz7ChaHibqzNIuZyPbUgNYSBRlumibIPUfWg/640?wx_fmt=jpeg&amp;tp=webp&amp;wxfrom=5&amp;wx_lazy=1&amp;wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;">
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">有道词典</span></span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">有道词典</span></strong><span style="color: black;">：疑似拼写错误，<span style="color: black;">意见</span>将“Nest”修正为“Next”.</span></p><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_jpg/OaFsUa11r0B5aR5tPohvPg3DwIUvO8xVzWdXKgkdu4duRtU3LCksnLlkonRX4tomRPDBg9RjPWRevVCjjUEbpg/640?wx_fmt=jpeg&amp;tp=webp&amp;wxfrom=5&amp;wx_lazy=1&amp;wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;">
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">Grammarly</span></span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">Grammarly（免费版）</span></strong><span style="color: black;">：无错误。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">对比小结：有道词典更能识别不符合原文语境的单词误用。</span></strong></p>
    <h2 style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">总结：</span></strong></span></h2>
    <h2 style="color: black; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 10px;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;"><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_png/OaFsUa11r0Bs4ic2ppk8xY4Q3ibHZfZicEKu8ia6x0q3HQKt11jGibCZyKZut1XCVus4Go1zyARv0VK7VOWsrgG7sFQ/640?wx_fmt=png&amp;tp=webp&amp;wxfrom=5&amp;wx_lazy=1&amp;wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></span></strong></span></strong></span></h2>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">经过对比体验，<span style="color: black;">咱们</span><span style="color: black;">发掘</span>，三款<span style="color: black;">制品</span>各有优劣。<strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">不外</span>，综合来看，有道AI作文批改，用起来更<span style="color: black;">熟练</span>且顺手——<span style="color: black;">由于</span>看上去它更理解中国学生的学习习惯、痛点与难点。</strong></span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">有道AI老师是<span style="color: black;">怎样</span>做到的？这<span style="color: black;">背面</span>的核心<span style="color: black;">规律</span>又是什么？</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">从网易有道词典那里，钛<span style="color: black;">媒介</span><span style="color: black;">认识</span>到，网易有道词典AI作文批改功能<span style="color: black;">重点</span>由三个核心模块<span style="color: black;">形成</span>：评分模块、评语模块和纠错模块。</p>
    <img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_jpg/OaFsUa11r0B5aR5tPohvPg3DwIUvO8xVNSpibKk0wfIIDzsdMWgwyTOml3rviah4ZVHJhicrA3gVvqdWbAsduxelA/640?wx_fmt=jpeg&amp;tp=webp&amp;wxfrom=5&amp;wx_lazy=1&amp;wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;">
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;">有道AI作文批改评分模块框架</p>

    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">其中，评分的模型框架结合了传统的<span style="color: black;">办法</span>和深度学习的<span style="color: black;">办法</span>，以词、句、篇章<span style="color: black;">做为</span>核心的评分维度；评语模块<span style="color: black;">供给</span>全文评语、词汇<span style="color: black;">举荐</span>、范文<span style="color: black;">举荐</span>；纠错模块<span style="color: black;">供给</span>14个类别的语法错误识别及修正，<span style="color: black;">包含</span>浅层的拼写错误、深层的语法错误等。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">同期</span>，<span style="color: black;">咱们</span>得到了一份测试报告<span style="color: black;">表示</span>，在作文批改引擎方向，网易有道词典的算法性能更好。</span></p><img src="https://mmbiz.qpic.cn/mmbiz_jpg/OaFsUa11r0B5aR5tPohvPg3DwIUvO8xV2ADBcxnyOD21tUzl4HqhFtDg6YJ1y8Fj9h27fT7uibVdumBib1XoTdYA/640?wx_fmt=jpeg&amp;tp=webp&amp;wxfrom=5&amp;wx_lazy=1&amp;wx_co=1" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;">
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">评测时间 2020-03-31；P值-Precision 精确率, R值-Recall 召回率, F0.5-P值与R值的调和平均，其值越高，<span style="color: black;">一般</span><span style="color: black;">暗示</span>算法性能越好。</span></span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">以上表格的测试集<span style="color: black;">源自</span>于用户日志，<span style="color: black;">详细</span>来自三个方向，一是<span style="color: black;">她们</span>海外词典批改服务的用户请求日志，二是考研用户的请求日志，三是来自有道智云的行业数据集。有道团队将这三个数据集中各抽出一部分来做测试集，抽选规则随机。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">经过如上体验和对比，尤其是从<span style="color: black;">有些</span>细节方面，<strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">能够</span>看出来，有道AI作文批改的<span style="color: black;">开发</span>团队，是在<span style="color: black;">认识</span>了中国学生的难点和痛点之后，再进行了针对性和差异化的<span style="color: black;">研发</span>。</strong></span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">这在当前<span style="color: black;">优秀</span>老师资源分布不均，且<span style="color: black;">非常</span>有限的<span style="color: black;">状况</span>下，有道AI作文批改老师的<span style="color: black;">显现</span>，无疑为大<span style="color: black;">都数</span>英语学习者，<span style="color: black;">供给</span>了一位免费的专属私人教师。</span></p>
    <p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">更为重要的是，与真人老师比起来，有道AI作文批改老师在识别后，<span style="color: black;">能够</span>随时随地，在<span style="color: black;">第1</span>时间给出作业反馈，以及后续学习、<span style="color: black;">加强</span>的<span style="color: black;">意见</span>，更细致且<span style="color: black;">有效</span>，这不仅<span style="color: black;">能够</span><span style="color: black;">帮忙</span>学生在备考之际给出“临门一脚”的<span style="color: black;">指点</span>，还能在<span style="color: black;">平常</span>反复训练中起到重要的<span style="color: black;">功效</span>。</span></p>
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4lqedz 发表于 2024-11-3 16:40:09

我完全同意你的看法，期待我们能深入探讨这个问题。
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