特级教师蒋军晶老师专为小学生打造的书+视频，帮忙孩儿写好作文，少走弯路！
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">你<span style="color: black;">是不是</span>为<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>写作文头疼过？</strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>逃避写作文，少写一篇是一篇；写起作文来像挤牙膏<span style="color: black;">同样</span>痛苦，三两句就没话说了；背了<span style="color: black;">非常多</span>名言名句，可写出来的<span style="color: black;">文案</span>还是像流水账，一点文采<span style="color: black;">亦</span><span style="color: black;">无</span>……</span></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">这些问题都出自两个<span style="color: black;">原由</span>：</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">第1</span>，<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>压根就<span style="color: black;">无</span>培养起对文学的兴趣；</strong><strong style="color: blue;">第二，<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>从来<span style="color: black;">无</span>学过“怎么<span style="color: black;">才可</span>写好一篇作文”。</strong><span style="color: black;">今天为<span style="color: black;">大众</span><span style="color: black;">举荐</span>一套</span><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;">特级教师蒋军晶老师</strong></span><span style="color: black;">的心血之作——</span><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;">《超级作文本》</strong></span><span style="color: black;">书+课！</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">这是蒋军晶老师历时3年的打磨，汇集了十<span style="color: black;">数年</span><span style="color: black;">教育</span>精华。</span><span style="color: black;">超级刚需的</span><strong style="color: blue;">语文教材同步</strong><span style="color: black;">的大作文，<span style="color: black;">帮忙</span>3-6年级<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span><span style="color: black;">再也不</span>惧怕写作。</span></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">“小语界顶流名师”蒋军晶重磅新作</span></strong></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">对<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>语文学习关注的家长，<span style="color: black;">必定</span>都听说过蒋军晶这个名字。蒋老师被<span style="color: black;">叫作</span>为“小语届的男神”。<span style="color: black;">由于</span>他每次呈现的课堂、讲座、访谈都能给<span style="color: black;">大众</span>带来观念上的碰撞和思索，每次出版的作品，都能让读者期待值拉满，并广泛受益。</span></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">蒋老师《作文敲敲门》的出版还是三年之前，这三年中，不少家长和老师都呼吁蒋老师能出版一套更接地气、更下沉的单元同步作文书。那样的话，<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>不论是要<span style="color: black;">处理</span>课内单元作文，还是课外<span style="color: black;">提高</span>，都能找到适合自己的作文工具书啦。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">《超级作文本》就在<span style="color: black;">大众</span>殷殷期盼中隆重登场啦。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">细心的家长会<span style="color: black;">发掘</span>，像蒋老师<span style="color: black;">这般</span>的<span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;">耕耘在<span style="color: black;">教育</span>的一线大咖名师</strong></span>出版同步作文书的还真不多见。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">这个类别的书大<span style="color: black;">大都是</span> “好词好句+范文点评+模板结构”的样式，能为写好“这一篇”<span style="color: black;">文案</span><span style="color: black;">供给</span>“便利抄”，能为有写作<span style="color: black;">科研</span>兴趣的<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span><span style="color: black;">供给</span>素材，但它们<span style="color: black;">没法</span>给予<span style="color: black;">更加多</span>写作思维的<span style="color: black;">提高</span>，<span style="color: black;">同期</span><span style="color: black;">亦</span>存在脱离一线<span style="color: black;">教育</span>课堂和<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>学习实况的现实。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;">《超级作文本》真的真的和它们都不<span style="color: black;">同样</span>！</strong></span></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">国字号大社出品，品质有<span style="color: black;">保准</span></span></strong></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">《超级作文本》的出版方是<span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;">人民文学出版社</strong></span>。众所周知，<span style="color: black;">做为</span>国字号大社、精品图书的代言人，它对所出版的<span style="color: black;">制品</span>是有着严格的审查机制的，从不<span style="color: black;">准许</span>随意“恰烂饭”“蹭热点”。这一次，人文社隆重推出文教助学读物，还是这么<span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;">刚需的同步作文书</strong></span>，那说明其内容<span style="color: black;">必定</span>是经得起考验，<span style="color: black;">乃至</span>堪<span style="color: black;">叫作</span><span style="color: black;">行业</span>中的佼佼者。</span></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">将<span style="color: black;">教育</span>现场集结成书</span></strong></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">《超级作文本》这一次出版的四本，<span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;">对应咱们的春季开学，是三至六年级的下册</strong></span>。（上册预计在2024年暑假之前出版）</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">《超级作文本》是“<span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;">一间读写教室</strong></span>”丛书中最先推出的一个系列。据人文社介绍，这个丛书名来自于蒋老师每日上课的教室名。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><img src="//q8.itc.cn/q_70/images03/20240910/26d9804ff42e4964bd069b247c933031.jpeg" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">蒋老师<span style="color: black;">每日</span>和自己班里的<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>在“一间读写教室”中上课、聊天、阅读、讨论……<span style="color: black;">亦</span>带领社团的<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>在<span style="color: black;">这儿</span>观影、辩论、上创意课……</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">一间读写教室里的学习现场让一届又一届<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>念念不忘。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">这次，蒋老师将压箱底的“宝贝”都拿出来了，<span style="color: black;">奥秘</span>的“一间读写教室”集结出版啦。</span></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">为何</span><span style="color: black;">举荐</span><span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>读《超级作文本》？</span></strong></span></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;">与教材单元完全对应的，内容刚需，实用性强</strong></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">小学<span style="color: black;">周期</span>，一二年级不考试，无写作<span style="color: black;">需求</span>，<span style="color: black;">然则</span>从三年级<span style="color: black;">起始</span>，<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>一下子要面临写篇章作文了，<span style="color: black;">每一个</span>学期光课内的单元习作就有7-8次。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">忽然</span>之间的<span style="color: black;">需求</span><span style="color: black;">提高</span>，对大<span style="color: black;">都数</span><span style="color: black;">孩儿</span><span style="color: black;">来讲</span>，这是语文学习<span style="color: black;">第1</span>个 “分水岭”，找不到适合的训练路径，或许以后写作就<span style="color: black;">成为了</span>语文学习拖后腿的“老大难”了。</span></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">因此</span>，眼面前的课本上<span style="color: black;">需求</span>的几篇作文就<span style="color: black;">成为了</span><span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>和家长的老大难问题，亟需<span style="color: black;">处理</span>。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">这套《超级作文本》<span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;">直接同步教材单元写作，能够<span style="color: black;">处理</span><span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>、家长，<span style="color: black;">乃至</span>是老师们当下的担忧。</strong></span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">以三级下册为例，语文教材中的单元习作共7次，其中，第3单元是“综合性学习单元”，<span style="color: black;">无</span>习作<span style="color: black;">需求</span>。<span style="color: black;">因此呢</span>，《超级作文本》三年级下册<span style="color: black;">亦</span>是有相应的7个单元的内容，且与语文书的标序一致，<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>们很容易就能翻找到。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><img src="//q4.itc.cn/q_70/images03/20240910/090a2dc6aa91459cb7f0eafcb00a9d49.jpeg" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">其中<span style="color: black;">尤其</span>要说明的是，六年级下册教材上<span style="color: black;">仅有</span>5个单元有习作<span style="color: black;">需求</span>，蒋老师在这5个单元之外，</span><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">按照</span>毕业班学生面临的<span style="color: black;">详细</span>的写作语境，<span style="color: black;">尤其</span>设置了两个单元</strong></span><span style="color: black;">，即《<span style="color: black;">怎样</span>写好命题作文》和《难忘的小学生活》（<span style="color: black;">怎样</span>写毕业赠言，制作成长纪念册）。</span></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">在每一个单元习作<span style="color: black;">指点</span>之前，蒋老师都<span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;">以教材<span style="color: black;">需求</span>为出发点来展开</strong></span>，<span style="color: black;">乃至</span>说是把教材上的<span style="color: black;">需求</span>掰开了、揉碎了，<span style="color: black;">而后</span>再一点一点娓娓道来。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">举个例子 ，五年级下册第7单元《中国的世界文化遗产》，语文书上的写作提示比较长，“搜索资料”“整理资料”“撰写”这三个流程用纯文字集中呈现的。<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>们在老师不讲解的情况下，即便是读明白了，<span style="color: black;">亦</span>很难动笔<span style="color: black;">起始</span>写。</span></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">针对这个单元的<span style="color: black;">需求</span>，蒋老师在《超级作文本》中以<span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;">举例子的方式一点一点讲解</strong></span>，并对关键的<span style="color: black;">需求</span>语句用红色<span style="color: black;">浪花</span>线标注。<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>们对照上面的<span style="color: black;">过程</span>，一点一点读下来，教材设计的深层用意<span style="color: black;">亦</span>就挖掘透了。</span></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">有时候，蒋老师还会把<span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;">语文书上<span style="color: black;">显现</span>的图表、情境，周到地呈<span style="color: black;">此刻</span>《超级作文本》里</strong></span>，创造了<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>们<span style="color: black;">熟练</span>的场景，便于更直接、有效地将课堂嫁接到书中来。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><img src="//q2.itc.cn/q_70/images03/20240910/6c46e5a9ce694f7888fcb818aa65922c.jpeg" style="width: 50%; margin-bottom: 20px;"></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">有时候，蒋老师还会<span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;">带着学生分析教材上的<span style="color: black;">需求</span>，教<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>们<span style="color: black;">怎样</span>审题</strong></span>。这不仅<span style="color: black;">帮忙</span><span style="color: black;">孩儿</span><span style="color: black;">处理</span>了“这一类”<span style="color: black;">文案</span>的写作，<span style="color: black;">更加是</span>示范了审题的技巧。</span></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;">以<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>读得懂、学得会为宗旨，呈现方式<span style="color: black;">尤其</span>，<span style="color: black;">指点</span><span style="color: black;">过程</span>清晰</strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;">“我永远以读者的感受为<span style="color: black;">第1</span>追求，竭尽全力做一个贴心的</strong></span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;">作</strong></span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;">者。”</strong></span></span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">听蒋老师说这句话，结合看《超级作文本》的呈现方式，<span style="color: black;">博主</span>真的有被感动到，<span style="color: black;">倘若</span>我小时候能遇到<span style="color: black;">这般</span>的老师就好了。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">市面上大<span style="color: black;">都数</span>同步类作文书，以“<span style="color: black;">需求</span>解析”“词语<span style="color: black;">累积</span>”“范文展示”“框架模板”的方式呈现，信息素材丰富，文字量<span style="color: black;">很强</span>。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">针对</span>爱<span style="color: black;">科研</span>作文技法的<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span><span style="color: black;">来讲</span>，<span style="color: black;">这般</span>的书有时候真有用，但对<span style="color: black;">都数</span><span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>来讲，可能<span style="color: black;">便是</span>憋不出<span style="color: black;">文案</span>时的“便利抄”和临考前的“救命稻草”了——迫不得已，背上几篇，需要的时候“套”一下，或许<span style="color: black;">亦</span>能得个还不错的分数。<span style="color: black;">然则</span>，<span style="color: black;">这般</span>对<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>好吗？</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">《超级作文本》的呈现方式是<span style="color: black;">尤其</span>的，它<span style="color: black;">无</span>大段的文字讲解，更<span style="color: black;">无</span><span style="color: black;">供给</span>琳琅满目的“好词好句好段”，它只是以<span style="color: black;">过程</span>1、<span style="color: black;">过程</span>2、<span style="color: black;">过程</span>3……的形式提示审题的路径，<span style="color: black;">指点</span>写好这一篇、这一类<span style="color: black;">文案</span>的<span style="color: black;">办法</span>、技巧，且<span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">这些<span style="color: black;">过程</span>大<span style="color: black;">大都是</span><span style="color: black;">规律</span>层</span></strong></span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;">面</strong></span></span><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">的<span style="color: black;">教育</span></span></strong></span>。<span style="color: black;">因此呢</span>，<span style="color: black;">博主</span>将其理解为蒋老师对小读者“<span style="color: black;">非常</span>友好”的编写用心。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">例如</span>四年级下册第4单元《我的动物<span style="color: black;">伴侣</span>》，教材上分别给了“寻找走失的小羊”“请邻居暂时帮忙喂养小狗”“请<span style="color: black;">朋友</span>收养小猫”这三个情境，让<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>们<span style="color: black;">选取</span>其中一种情境<span style="color: black;">或</span>自己再创设一个情境，来介绍自己的动物<span style="color: black;">伴侣</span>。蒋老师是怎么教的呢？</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">蒋老师直接在开篇就将这个单元写作的训练<span style="color: black;">目的</span>提炼出来——<span style="color: black;">认识</span>“情境<span style="color: black;">区别</span>，目的<span style="color: black;">区别</span>，写法<span style="color: black;">亦</span>就<span style="color: black;">区别</span>”——并在<span style="color: black;">过程</span>1中直接<span style="color: black;">知道</span>这个单元<span style="color: black;">经过</span>写作，要<span style="color: black;">把握</span>什么<span style="color: black;">办法</span>。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">此时</span></span><span style="color: black;">候，<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>会遇到一个困难：什么是“情境”，什么是“目的”？什么又是写法的变化，要怎么变呢？</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">词语的字面意思<span style="color: black;">经过</span>翻查词典并不难，难就难在<span style="color: black;">怎样</span>让<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>在写作的语境中理解。有经验的蒋老师是怎么做的呢？</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">蒋老师“友好地”并<span style="color: black;">无</span><span style="color: black;">选取</span>用大段文字来解释它们，而是<span style="color: black;">经过</span>“<span style="color: black;">过程</span>2”一次“外貌描写”来举例说明。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">怎么举</span><span style="color: black;">例呢？三个情境，三种目的，描写同一位老师的外貌。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">情境一，对老师的<span style="color: black;">第1</span>印象，抓住特点，直接输出。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">情境二：写一则《寻人启事》寻找这位老师，写出他和别人不<span style="color: black;">同样</span>的特点。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">情境三：给这位老师介绍对象，<span style="color: black;">怎样</span>向女方介绍他的长相。当然是巧妙地说优点啦。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">细心研读<span style="color: black;">能够</span><span style="color: black;">发掘</span>，三个情境片段边上，蒋老师设置了旁注栏，提请<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>们<span style="color: black;">重视</span>到词句都有<span style="color: black;">尤其</span>的加重处理。这一类温馨的提示，贯穿在这套书的角角落落。</span></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">举例</span><span style="color: black;">结束，读完上面三个情境片段，对这个单元的写作训练目的——“情境<span style="color: black;">区别</span>，目的<span style="color: black;">区别</span>，写法<span style="color: black;">亦</span>就<span style="color: black;">区别</span>”，<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>们的理解就水到渠<span style="color: black;">成为了</span>。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">紧接着，要回到这个单元的<span style="color: black;">需求</span>“我的动物<span style="color: black;">伴侣</span>”的写作中去了。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">针对</span>教材上呈现的、供<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span><span style="color: black;">选取</span>的三个情境，蒋老师一个都不落地一一讲解过来，其要点、难点都呈<span style="color: black;">此刻</span>页面的<span style="color: black;">尤其</span>设计中了：</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">有时候是用星星（⭐️）的数量<span style="color: black;">或</span>大拇指贴纸<span style="color: black;">暗示</span><span style="color: black;">文案</span>的优秀程度；</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">有时候是用彩色字体标重，<span style="color: black;">表现</span><span style="color: black;">有些</span><span style="color: black;">尤其</span>的写法；</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">有时候是小喇叭、荧光笔标画来总结写作要点；</span></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">除了教材上<span style="color: black;">供给</span>的三个情境，蒋老师还多<span style="color: black;">增多</span>了一个常用情境的写作——考试时候写“我的动物<span style="color: black;">伴侣</span>”。这<span style="color: black;">便是</span>从课内写作链接到更为实用的“应试写作”了。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">接下来，<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>们<span style="color: black;">亦</span><span style="color: black;">能够</span>自己创设情境来写一写了。想不出情境？<span style="color: black;">无</span>素材可写？<span style="color: black;">那样</span>，蒋老师来提醒一下吧。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">以下这些情境，供你自由<span style="color: black;">选取</span>。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">倘若</span>还动不了笔，那就再看两篇范文吧。稿纸都备好了，<span style="color: black;">起始</span>尝试写一写吧。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">由此，一个单元同步作文的<span style="color: black;">指点</span>过程就完<span style="color: black;">成为了</span>。从审题，到举例理解写作目的，到情境写作<span style="color: black;">办法</span>的<span style="color: black;">指点</span>，到范文展示，一气呵成，简洁明了，又不乏深度。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">而<span style="color: black;">这般</span>的理念贯穿于《超级作文本》整套书的<span style="color: black;">每一个</span>单元作文中，值得<span style="color: black;">大众</span>拿到书以后细细体会。</span></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">设计语言丰富精巧，讲述方式深入浅出，<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>们看得懂、记得牢、学得会</span></strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">《超级作文本》对小读者 “友好”的方式，不仅<span style="color: black;">表现</span>在蒋老师每一个单元的<span style="color: black;">教育</span>设计上，还<span style="color: black;">表现</span>在整套书丰富的设计语言上。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">书中处处透露着蒋老师和出版方的诚意，<span style="color: black;">她们</span>时时刻刻都在<span style="color: black;">奋斗</span>尝试着用简洁又丰富的设计，深入浅出地<span style="color: black;">指点</span><span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>们写作。</span><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">一切都是为了让<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>看得懂、记得牢、学得会。</span></strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">六年级下册第6单元，这幅图展示的是冰天雪地里的公交站<span style="color: black;">周边</span>，一个少年捡回一条流浪狗的情景。细看之下会<span style="color: black;">发掘</span>，公交站牌上的文字，正是习作的<span style="color: black;">需求</span>，图画<span style="color: black;">亦</span>正是后面范文的配图。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;"><span style="color: black;">针对</span>一本同步作文书来讲，<span style="color: black;">博主</span>从<span style="color: black;">无</span>见过如此精巧的设计，<span style="color: black;">亦</span>能想象，<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>们在<span style="color: black;">发掘</span>这个“彩蛋“时候的欣喜神情。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">五年级下册第2单元《写读后感》，蒋老师一<span style="color: black;">起始</span>就用一张资料卡片展示了一篇完整的读后感应该<span style="color: black;">包含</span>题、读、感三个部分，简单直接。</span><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">并且这三个部分用了橙、蓝、紫三种颜色<span style="color: black;">亦</span>是有用意的。</span></strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">在讲解“同一本书，读后的感想<span style="color: black;">区别</span>，主标题当然<span style="color: black;">亦</span><span style="color: black;">区别</span>”时候，直接出示了三张资料卡片，细看<span style="color: black;">发掘</span>，副标题是<span style="color: black;">同样</span>的，用了同一种颜色，但主标题<span style="color: black;">区别</span>，就用了三种颜色，以示区别。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">当作者讲到令<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>头痛的，<span style="color: black;">亦</span>是最难写的“感想部分”时，不忘与<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>共情，出示了一幅能<span style="color: black;">表率</span><span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>心声的涂鸦小漫画。<span style="color: black;">这般</span>一来，<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>可能就不会为自己不<span style="color: black;">善于</span>写读后感而感到尴尬了，<span style="color: black;">由于</span>蒋老师理解他，有<span style="color: black;">这般</span>困难的<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span><span style="color: black;">亦</span>不少呢。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">读后感的“感想部分”<span style="color: black;">能够</span>用三个<span style="color: black;">办法</span>来扩展和深入地写。分别是</span><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">1.联系书本谈感想；2.联系阅读谈感想；3.联系生活谈感想。</span></strong></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">蒋老师呈现这三个<span style="color: black;">办法</span>的时候</span><span style="color: black;">，</span><span style="color: black;"><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">特</span></strong></span><span style="color: black;">别<span style="color: black;">注重</span>过程性<span style="color: black;">指点</span>和写作<span style="color: black;">规律</span>的训练。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">他展示了三篇分别<span style="color: black;">得到</span>一颗星、三颗星、五颗星的<span style="color: black;">文案</span>。这三篇<span style="color: black;">文案</span>将<span style="color: black;">以上</span>方法一个一个加入，且文字呈现的颜色正好对应题、读、感三种颜色，且在最后一篇<span style="color: black;">文案</span>页面中展现了设计上的“大圆满”。</span></p>
<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">视觉上，<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>在阅读的时候，就会容易<span style="color: black;">重视</span>到这三部分颜色的文字对应的<span style="color: black;">区别</span>写作<span style="color: black;">办法</span>，<span style="color: black;">更易</span>理解和模仿。</span></p>
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<p style="font-size: 16px; color: black; line-height: 40px; text-align: left; margin-bottom: 15px;"><span style="color: black;">《超级作文本》中<span style="color: black;">这般</span>“友好”的设置还有非常多，<span style="color: black;">例如</span>，有理清<span style="color: black;">文案</span>结构的</span><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">思维导图</span></strong><span style="color: black;">；为了让游记看上去条理清楚，除了将地点和行走语言标重之外，还设置了</span><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">线路图</span></strong><span style="color: black;">；</span><span style="color: black;">为了帮<span style="color: black;">孩儿</span>区别写“煎荷包蛋”<span style="color: black;">区别</span>于写“学会煎荷包蛋”，<span style="color: black;">尤其</span>配了</span><strong style="color: blue;"><span style="color: black;">漫画</span></strong><span style="color: black;">进</span><span style="color: black;">行图示说明……</span></p>
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